1099159 - Tiles product page: implement copy changes

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Bryan Clark (DevTools PM) [:clarkbw]]

We'd like to tweak some of the copy on the Tiles product page.  Below are the sections that are affected with the revised copy intended to replace what is running in production now.  Note that I used inline markdown style links as wasn't sure the best way to show those.

Respects your privacy 
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As with all Mozilla products, Tiles provide users with extensive control over their personal data. Mozilla respects your privacy and any data collected by Mozilla via Tiles will be done in accordance with our (Privacy Notice)[https://www.mozilla.org/privacy/firefox/]. Only aggregated data from Tiles is stored by Mozilla (e.g., we calculate the total number of views and clicks an individual Tile receives). This helps us deliver the most interesting and relevant content to our users. You can deactivate the Tiles feature by clicking on the gear icon on the top right corner of the new tab page, and selecting Classic to show just history tiles or blank mode. 

What data is being collected? 
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Mozilla collects Tiles related data such as number of clicks, impressions and tile specific data (e.g., position and size of grid) to help Mozilla determine how frequently the tile has been seen or interacted with, as well as your IP address (collected by Firefox client side only, quickly translated into a region code and then deleted). 

Where can I learn more? 
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(How do Tiles work?)[https://support.mozilla.org/kb/how-do-tiles-work-firefox]

Comment 1

[Geoff Piper]

This copy was Patrick's further refining of mine and is good to me.

Comment 2

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Can this go live on Monday?

Comment 3

[Geoff Piper]

In my view yes, not sure who else needs to weigh in and confirm...

Comment 4

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

This page has been localized into 40+ languages, so this change affects l10n.

Comment 5

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Attachment: pull request

Comment 6

[Patrick Finch]

(In reply to Kohei Yoshino [:kohei] from comment #4)
> This page has been localized into 40+ languages, so this change affects l10n.

Please only make this change for en-US, and we will do a more thorough review to be localised shortly.  I am sorry that I did not include this context.  We will make those changes in the next week and then have a new version to be localised.  I did not want to create two sets of localisation activities for changes to 1 page.

Comment 7

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Understood, I've updated my pull request to apply this copy changes only to en-US.

Comment 8

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/ebfe0b48ea68502b09675f5f958fd9300647c33d
Fix Bug 1099159 - Tiles product page: implement copy changes

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/3340e1f3c0a0f1bf8e1b3007a0215db5ceb06d76
Merge pull request #2516 from kyoshino/bug-1099159-tiles-copy

Fix Bug 1099159 - Tiles product page: implement copy changes