1194814 - [Privacy][de]: Localizing Privacy Principles Poster

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: de / German, defect)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

We need to localize the content in the poster: https://www.dropbox.com/s/rztq6m8qz1fkgv0/dataPrivacyPrinciples_v3.jpg?dl=0

Steps:
- Localize the content here https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1b1XiBgoRvhHYv5DuwTjMI54uuu9XnGsBNIqQGnEQfgY/edit#gid=1700727694 
- Review Image file
- Finalize and signoff

Be mindful of the space on the poster.  Font size may be reduced to accommodate, but the size will be consistent from one block to another.

This will be printed as a poster and displayed in Mozilla offices

Comment 1

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

I understand that there are a lot of competing projects.  Focus on those deliverables.  This can wait.

Comment 2

[Sebastian Hengst [:aryx] (needinfo me if it's about an intermittent or backout)]

Alt: "Wir sammeln nur, was benötigt wird, anonymisieren, falls möglich und löschen Daten, wenn sie nicht mehr benötigt werden."
Neu: "Wir sammeln nur, was benötigt wird, anonymisieren, falls möglich, und löschen Daten, wenn sie nicht mehr benötigt werden."
(übernommen)

"Use and share information in a way that is transparent and benefits the user."
"Datennutzung und -weitergabe sind transparent und müssen dem Benutzer dienen."
"must / have to" fehlen im Englischen. Soll zu "dienen dem Benutzer" abgeändert werden?

"Sicherheit und Benutzererlebnis müssen in einem durchdachten Gleichgewicht stehen."
Man könnte vom Englischen abweichen und es abändern zu:
"Sicherheit und Benutzererlebnis müssen in einem ausgewogenen Gleichgewicht stehen."

Alt: "VERTEIDIGUNG DURCH TIEFE"
Vorschlag: "VERTEIDIGUNG AUF MEHREREN EBENEN"

Comment 3

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Thanks, the translation is finished.


Peiying, please prepare the image for review.

Comment 4

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you for the quick turnaround.  I will comment in this bug once the poster is ready for review.

Comment 5

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hello Matt,

Please start putting together the poster.  Once a draft is done, share the link with the community members in the bug for review. Thanks!

Comment 6

[mternoway]

Attachment: dataPrivacyPrinciples_de.jpg

Hi all, I've attached a high resolution German version of the Privacy Principles poster.

Thanks,
Matt

Comment 7

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Thanks, the only issue I see is the hyphen in the top right box in „Datennutzung und -weitergabe“ must be attached to the third word and thus move to the new line.

Otherwise it looks fine to me. Aryx?

Comment 8

[Sebastian Hengst [:aryx] (needinfo me if it's about an intermittent or backout)]

Yes, that's the only issue I noticed.

Comment 9

[mternoway]

Attachment: dataPrivacyPrinciples_de.jpg

Thanks for catching this. I have attached an updated version. 

Matt

Comment 10

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Thanks, looks good to me now.

Comment 11

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

I added the file to your repository
https://svn.mozilla.org/projects/mozilla.com/trunk/locales/de/privacy/principles.lang

* 2 strings were imported from privacy/index.lang
* I tried to copy the strings from the Google Docs, please double check the result, especially the change of case from uppercase to normal.
* I didn't copy the last string because it's slightly different (mozilla.org doesn't have "by our global community")

Comment 12

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Wow, new strings already. I hope I got everything right. Is there anything else to be done here or can this bug be closed?

Comment 13

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to Michael 'Coce' Köhler from comment #12)
> Wow, new strings already. I hope I got everything right. Is there anything
> else to be done here or can this bug be closed?

I think it can be closed.