1330441 - Copy change on download confirmation page - /new/?scene=2

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Eric Renaud [:erenaud]]

Anytime before, but no later than 1/24/2017:

Swap out the current headline: 

"Enjoy online freedom." 

with:
 
"The last independent browser." 

on the download confirmation page (/new/?scene=2)
https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/new/?scene=2

Comment 1

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Attachment: GitHub pull request

Comment 2

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Hi Eric,

I've opened a pull request for this change above, but marked it as do-not-merge for now, before we start translating this new string. Are we sure we want to be as bold as to state we're the "last" independent browser. I'd say this is easily questionable at present and could also be over more so false in the future. It almost feels like we're making a statement or prediction for something that is yet to come?

Comment 3

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Let me know if this is the message we want to go with. The deadline is approaching.

Comment 4

[Jennifer Balaco]

Alex, 

This is message has been approved for use. Thanks for checking.

Comment 5

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

(In reply to Jennifer Balaco from comment #4)
> Alex, 
> 
> This is message has been approved for use. Thanks for checking.

Ok thanks, we'll proceed with translating the new string.

Comment 6

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you.  It has been exposed for localization.

Comment 7

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Fixed in https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/5b25dc7e567922dac1b9cb871c0d4c0358f1c669