1333626 - [Focus] [id] App Store screenshots: review localized version

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: id / Indonesian, defect)

Description

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Here is the link to the localized screenshots we were provided with: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3iNlthQXwbpX1BJRnVIeVFueWM

Note that English version of screenshots can be found on Bug 1326395 in the attachements.

There is no firm deadline as to when the review needs to be made as we have been told updates to localized versions can be done whenever requested - however since we are launching the app very soon, let's aim for the end of this week if that is possible.

Please close this bug as Fixed if all looks good to you.
Thank you!

Comment 1

[Fauzan Alfi]

(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #0)
> Here is the link to the localized screenshots we were provided with:
> https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3iNlthQXwbpX1BJRnVIeVFueWM
> 
> Note that English version of screenshots can be found on Bug 1326395 in the
> attachements.
> 
> There is no firm deadline as to when the review needs to be made as we have
> been told updates to localized versions can be done whenever requested -
> however since we are launching the app very soon, let's aim for the end of
> this week if that is possible.
> 
> Please close this bug as Fixed if all looks good to you.
> Thank you!

Hi Delphine,

We need to change this string: "Laman Web lebih cepat memuat dengan menyingkirkan pelacak"
into this: "Laman Web lebih cepat dimuat dengan menyingkirkan pelacak"

That's all. Everything is OK.

Thanks!

Comment 2

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Thanks Fauzan! Please make that edit directly in Pontoon (https://pontoon.mozilla.org/id/appstores/focus_ios/screenshots_v2_1.lang).
You may close the bug here once all looks good, to let me know. Thanks!

Comment 3

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Sorry, no need to close bug until you review the final version :) But please let me know once you've made the necessary changes in Pontoon so we can get updated screenshots for review.

Comment 4

[Fauzan Alfi]

(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #2)
> Thanks Fauzan! Please make that edit directly in Pontoon
> (https://pontoon.mozilla.org/id/appstores/focus_ios/screenshots_v2_1.lang).
> You may close the bug here once all looks good, to let me know. Thanks!

I've fixed it in Pontoon. Please check. Thanks!

Comment 5

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Adding Tyron so he can help with updating the screenshots and resubmit here for review from you once that is done. THanks!

Comment 6

[Ty Flanagan]

Attachment: iOS-Focus_iPad-Performance_ID.png

Comment 7

[Ty Flanagan]

Attachment: iOS-Focus_iPhone-Performance_ID.png

Comment 8

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Hey Fauzan: can you confirm if everything looks good now?
thanks!

Comment 9

[Fauzan Alfi]

(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #8)
> Hey Fauzan: can you confirm if everything looks good now?
> thanks!

Yes, everything looks great now!

Thanks a lot!

Comment 10

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

\o/
Thanks, closing bug then!