515487 - Moz Service Week ACTUAL Week: Update the right hand section in "pledge your hours" page

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Websites Graveyard :: mozillaservice.org, defect)

Description

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

Steps to reproduce:
1.Go to  http://mozillaservice.stage.mozilla.com/tell_us/your_pledge/en_US?phase=2
2.Notice the right hand section.-"Already have a project idea? "

This should probably be updated to something like-"Completed your project?-Tell us your story."

Comment 1

[Mary]

Agreed.  Jane, how about:

Don't forget to report your donated hours. Every action counts.

Share Now

Comment 2

[Jane Finette]

Great stuff - thanks Mary

Comment 3

[Austin King [:ozten]]

(In reply to comment #1)
So is this:
Completed your project?
Don't forget to report your donated hours. Every action counts.

Share Now

This is too much copy:
http://skitch.com/oztenskitch/b67ti/mozilla-service-pledge-your-hours

Comment 4

[Jane Finette]

Completed your project?
Report your donated hours. 
Every action counts.


Is that better Austin, or still too long?

Comment 5

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Do we want to use a different style of box?
The "box prime" (red one) and "box sub" (green one) are a heading and a styled link. The buttons are all three short words.

We also have the "extra" sidebar box. This is a heading, paragraph, and optional styled link.

I think we should either do:
1) box prime with
Completed your project?

Every action counts.
http://skitch.com/oztenskitch/b9dii/mozilla-service-pledge-your-hours

or
2) extra with
Completed your project?
Don't forget to report your donated hours. Every action counts.

Share Now
http://skitch.com/oztenskitch/b9di5/mozilla-service-pledge-your-hours

Comment 6

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Re-reading this bug I'm confused. Krupa's original copy makes the most sense. 

The page we are on is the pledge your hours page. The sidebar box is designed to take them off of this page to the "share your story" page. Updating the copy, it should still talke about the stories page, right?

Comment 7

[Mary]

Ah yes -- Krupa is right -- as always ;-)

Completed your project?
Tell us your story

Can we change the first 1st sentence in the intro paragraph to urge folks to also share completed?

Old copy: 

By pledging your support below, we can track the number of hours and projects the Mozilla community will contribute during September 14-21, 2009.

New copy:

By sharing your hours below, we can track the number of hours and projects the Mozilla community contributes during September 14-21, 2009.

Pretty please?

Comment 8

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Updated for en only r51384.

Comment 9

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

verified.Thanks!