621787 - typo on /customize

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect)

Description

[Asa Dotzler [:asa]]

http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/

"Choose from thousands of ways to add features, extend functionality and make Firefox ****awork**** for exactly the way you use the Web. We've grouped some of our favorites into the collections below."

Comment 1

[John Slater]

Steven, here's a small typo fix for you when you have a sec. Not super high priority but would be nice to clean up.

The correct wording should be "work" instead of "awork".

Comment 2

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

Fixed in trunk in r80039. Merged to stage in r80040.

Comment 3

[John Slater]

Thanks Steven. Raymond, does this look ok to you?

Comment 4

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

Reopening  as the current text
"Choose from thousands of ways to add features, extend functionality and make Firefox work for exactly the way you use the Web. We've grouped some of our favorites into the collections below."

should be
Choose from thousands of ways to add features, extend functionality and make Firefox work for you exactly the way you use the Web. We've grouped some of our favorites into the collections below.

Comment 5

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

This seems a bit awkward either way. Can we get confirmation from whoever actually wrote this?

Comment 6

[John Slater]

Correct text should be:

Choose from thousands of ways to add features, extend functionality and make Firefox work for exactly the way you use the Web. We've grouped some of our favorites into the collections below.

Comment 7

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

(In reply to comment #6)
> Correct text should be:
> ...

We're all set then.

Comment 8

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

qa-verified-trunk http://www-trunk.stage.mozilla.com/en-US/firefox/customize/

Comment 9

[James Long (:jlongster)]

Pushed to production

r80664 | [e-mail] | 2011-01-12 16:35:47 -0500 (Wed, 12 Jan 2011) | 6 lines

Comment 10

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

reopening as  bug  is still on production

Comment 11

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

(In reply to comment #10)
> reopening as  bug  is still on production

Looks fixed - maybe the update was still in progress?

Comment 12

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

Attachment: screenshot

see attached screenshot

Comment 13

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

(In reply to comment #12)
> see attached screenshot

I think that matches John's text from comment #6. Apologies if I'm staring right at it and missing it.

Comment 14

[raymond [:retornam] (inactive)]

(In reply to comment #13)
> (In reply to comment #12)
> > see attached screenshot
> 
> I think that matches John's text from comment #6. Apologies if I'm staring
> right at it and missing it.

Sorry Steven, I kept thinking that there should be a you in there.