700610 - [pl] translate Firefox Live 2 page

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect)

Description

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc (PTO until April 26)]

This bug tracks the translation of the new Firefox Live page for your locale.

This page is located on mozilla.org, here is the address on the staging server:

http://www-dev.allizom.org/pl/firefoxlive/

The translation is about 400 words long, The files are on SVN in two files:

/pl/firefoxlive/content.inc.html
http://viewvc.svn.mozilla.org/vc/projects/mozilla.com/trunk/pl/firefoxlive/content.inc.html?content-type=text%2Fplain&view=co

/pl/includes/l10n/firefoxlive.lang
http://viewvc.svn.mozilla.org/vc/projects/mozilla.com/trunk/pl/includes/l10n/firefoxlive.lang?content-type=text%2Fplain&view=co

Note that one of the strings in the page has a %BROWSER% variable in it that will be replaced dynamically by the visitors Browser name if he doesn"t use Firefox:
"We see you are using %BROWSER% as your Web browser."

If the browser name is not detected or is too long, a generic string will be displayed instead:
"Looks like you are not using Firefox as your Web browser."

The public launch is panned for November 9. As usual for mozilla.org, we can publish your locale at any time at your discretion, so no problem for example to add locales after the launch.

Thanks

Comment 1

[Sara Prussak]

Attachment: The translation

Marcoos, could you have a look at my translation?

Comment 2

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

Wow, good job, Sara!

Only a few minor issues:

+            <li>Pomóż nam, dzieląc się ze najomymi tymi trzema zwierzakami.</li>

typo: should be "znajomymi"

+    <h2>Miękka i puszysta maskotka. <span>Twarde i silne przekonania</span></h2>
Suggestion: replace "Twarde" with "Trwałe" or "Mocne".

+    <p>Firefox został stworzony przez organizację non-profit i jest jedyną przeglądarką, która będzie Cię chronić, nowymi rozwiązaniami zapewni Ci kontrolę i zadba o to, by Sieć pozostała Twoim publicznym zasobem.</p>

Drop "Twoim" or replace it with "dla Ciebie". "Twoim" sounds like an exclusive possession.

+    <h3>Wejsprzyj <span>Zoo w Knoxville</span></h3>

Typo. Should be "Wesprzyj"

+    <p>Mamy nadzieję, że podobają Ci się też nasze non-profit przekonania.</p>

I don't like "non-profit przekonania", it sounds unnatural. "Niekomercyjne" maybe?

-360° view
+Pełen widok

I would make it "Widok 360°".

+Lubisz młode zwierzaki? Mozilla Firefox udostępnia na żywo nagranie trzech młodych pand małych, które adoptowała. Podziel się tym ze swoimi znajomymi.

If "na żywo", then not a "nagranie", right? "Przekaz"? "Transmisję"?

Comment 3

[Sara Prussak]

Attachment: Corrected translation

I hope it's okay now :)

Comment 4

[Sara Prussak]

Changes committed in revision 97532.

Comment 5

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

Sara will make some additional changes to make the text layout better (some  s mostly), so this is not final yet.

Comment 6

[Sara Prussak]

Attachment: Updated files

It's basically only non-breaking spaces added.

Comment 7

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

Comment on attachment 572937 [details] [diff] [review]
Updated files

Review of attachment 572937 [details] [diff] [review]:
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Looks OK. :)

Comment 8

[Sara Prussak]

Committed in revision r97534

Comment 9

[Sara Prussak]

A minor mistranslation fixed in revision r97536 as advised by marcoos :)

Comment 10

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

Pascal, we consider r97536 production ready.

Comment 11

[Marek Stępień [:marcoos, inactive]]

This is fixed.