711323 - Grammar fault on landing page

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Participation Infrastructure :: Phonebook, defect)

Description

[Naoki Hirata :nhirata (please use needinfo instead of cc)]

1. go to https://mozillians-dev.allizom.org/en-US/

Actual : "If you're looking for information on your fellow contributors, what they do and how to connect with them, you've come to right place."

Expected: "If you're looking for information on your fellow contributors, what they do and how to connect with them, then you've come to right place. 

Note: ; just look wierd as a list to separate the , having a then in the sentence seems to look better... or just having the sentence broken up might help.

Comment 1

[Aakash Desai [:aakashd]]

Aye, that's a bad sentence...Matej, any thoughts?

Comment 2

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

I wouldn't say it's necessarily wrong, nor does it sound awkward to me, but I think this is clearer regardless:


Welcome
to the Mozilla community directory.

Here you'll find information on your fellow contributors, what they do and how to connect with them.

Comment 3

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians

https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians/commit/9e5719963f6f42026f113e78338d4c15dd525941
[fix bug 711323] Change homepage wording.

https://github.com/mozilla/mozillians/commit/a7753717b92b82b5fbf650f8703ce528b0ccd79d
Merge pull request #369 from glogiotatidis/711323

[fix bug 711323] Change homepage wording.

Comment 4

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

Note these changes need some l10n love, we will need to update the strings in verbatim.