737901 - Copy changes to http://www.mozilla.org/firefox/toolkit/download-to-your-devices

Status: RESOLVED WONTFIX

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Please update the copy as follows:


[Speed panel]:

Button copy should read: More features (<--lowercase f)


[Smartphone panel]:

Headline should be: Type less, browse more and get to the Web quickly and easily. (<--remove second comma)


[Tablet panel]:

Headline should be: Optimized for the size, shape and the way you browse on tablets. (<--remove second comma)


[Add-ons panel]:

Button copy should read: Browse add-ons (<--lowercase a)


Thanks!

Comment 1

[Mike Alexis [:malexis]]

This is an old bug that didn't get triaged. Is this copy still valid and should we make these changes?

Comment 2

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Laura - would it be OK if we close this bug and start again with the Firefox family content redesign in March?  Thx.

Comment 3

[Laura Forrest]

Yikes -- I don't see the images coming through on this page. Looks like a bug?

Comment 4

[Laura Forrest]

(In reply to Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch] from comment #2)
> Laura - would it be OK if we close this bug and start again with the Firefox
> family content redesign in March?  Thx.

This content is nice to have, but not something Desktop has actively been using for campaigns currently. Carmen and the newsletter team may have been using it, so I'd check with them as well.

Comment 5

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

This page has been removed in Bug 882845.