Closed Bug 748589 Opened 12 years ago Closed 12 years ago

Kill "Persona ID" mentions on /persona

Categories

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

x86
macOS
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RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: lforrest, Assigned: matej)

Details

This page: http://www.mozilla.org/en-US/persona/ still uses "Persona ID"-- a term we've killed. 

Since we just did the consumer blurbs for the Style Primer, let's apply that work to this consumer facing landing page.

Let's essentially change the "Persona ID" mentions to either Persona or Browser ID. 

My pass below - Matej please revise as you see fit. The most notable change is in brackets at the bottom - there I think it's fine to use the term "Browser ID" on this consumer facing landing page.

Timing: this should be pretty simple, so within the next few days would be great, by 4/26. 

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A Better Way to Sign In

Mozilla Persona is based on the belief that your online identity should belong exclusively to you. With that in mind, we’ve created Persona to improve the way you sign in to websites.

Persona allows you to sign in to sites using an email address you choose. So, instead of having to manage usernames and passwords across your favorite sites and devices, you’ll have more time to do the important stuff. We’ll manage the details!
Own Your Data

Many sign-in systems carry your profile data with them; some even share that info with other sites and social networks. We believe you should control how your personal information is shared. Persona lets you get started with just your email address; you can add your profile data later, when and where you think it’s appropriate.
Easy for Publishers

Persona makes things easy for site owners, too. [Enabling Browser ID, the underlying Persona technology], on your site only takes a few lines of code and helps build good relationships by providing users with a trusted sign-in option. It’s a win-win!
Matej - does that timing work for you?
That all looks great to me, I just made a few other tweaks to the copy. Hope that's OK and not too disruptive.


A better way to sign in

At Mozilla, we believe that your online identity should belong exclusively to you. With that in mind, we created Persona to improve the way you sign in to websites.

Persona allows you to sign in to sites using an email address you choose. So, instead of having to manage multiple usernames and passwords across your favorite sites and devices, you’ll have more time to do the important stuff. We’ll manage the details!

Own your data

Many sign-in systems carry your profile data with them; some even share that info with other sites and social networks. We believe you should control how your personal information is shared. Persona lets you get started with just your email address; you can add your profile data later, when and where you think it’s appropriate.

Easy for publishers

Persona makes things easy for site owners, too. Enabling Browser ID, the underlying Persona technology, on your site only takes a few lines of code and helps build good relationships by providing users with a trusted sign-in option. It’s a win-win!
I like! Closing, thanks for the speedy turn-around.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 12 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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