906771 - [b2g][l10n][marketing][pt-BR]: l10n review of masterfirefoxos.com for 1.1 release

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: pt-BR / Portuguese (Brazil), defect, P1)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

pt-BR team has chosen to allow a localization agency to localize the web/video content and be only involved in review work due to current bandwidth.  Here is estimated scope of work, but not limited to the following:

- review(s) and correction of web content - format will be like the attached. You can make changes directly in the table.
- review(s) of audio script
- screening of voice talent - only if you choose to do so
- review(s) of audio recording
- review(s) of video/audio mixing
- review(s) of web content staging
- final signoff of the website.  

In addition, pt-BR team has also provided some Mozilla related glossary and term repository to facilitate the vendor's localization effort:

glossary: https://wiki.mozilla.org/Brasil/L10n-pt-BR/Glossario

AMO pt-BR, totally reviewed by our community: https://addons.mozilla.org/pt-BR/firefox/

Transvision with Gaia terms: http://transvision.mozfr.org/

Comment 1

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Fernando,

Once I get the files, hopefully by the end of the month, you can start reviewing. In the meantime, if there is any additional info the vendor needs, I will rely the message through the bug.

Thanks,
Peiying

Comment 2

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Grace, if additional info is needed for clarifications, please communicate through this bug.

Comment 3

[Fernando Pereira Silveira]

great! I'll wait for the files

Comment 4

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Hi Fernando, 

Attaching the files. 

Thanks!

Comment 5

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Attachment: masterfirefoxos.com pt-br

Comment 6

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Attachment: Video scripts_PT-BR.doc.txml.doc

Comment 7

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Fernando,

Were you able to make any progress on these files?  Be sure to follow the review instructions and pay attention what NOT to be removed.  We need your input as soon as possible in order to move on to the next step: staging web content and recording the audio script.  

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 8

[Fernando Pereira Silveira]

Attachment: masterfirefox_review.odt

Comment 9

[Fernando Pereira Silveira]

Attachment: Video scripts_review.odt

Comment 10

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you Fernando for the review comments.  We will get back to you with the next step.

Comment 11

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Fernando,

The site is up and you can find it here: http://masterfirefoxos.mozilla.org.  Select Brazil in the drop-down list at the bottom of  the page.  Not sure if you can get to the Brazil page directly from here: http://masterfirefoxos.mozilla.org/#/m05/t05.

Since it is pretty complex, please create a spreadsheet to provide feedback: one column with URL, one with old text, and one with correction. If necessary, you can also provide a screenshot as well.  

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 12

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Adding Reuben, Marcelo and Clauber to help with the reviews.

We need to get this done ASAP.  After the implementation of your comments, we will come back to you to officially sign off on the site.  Please consider using a google doc to document all the findings you identify.

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 13

[Marcelo Araldi]

Attachment: masterFxOS_review_marcelo.odt

Hey!
Here's my review... Please, let me know if there's something else I can help with :)

Comment 14

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you Marcelo for your prompt reply.  We will make the implementation and get back to you with another look.

Grace, 
Please pick up the attachment in comment #13 and relay the message. The instruction is pretty clear.  let me know if you have any questions.

Comment 15

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Fernando, Marcelo and team,

the implementation was done.  Could you please take another look, check and verify if there is anything else that needs to be addressed.  Please use the same format to provide your input.  

http://masterfirefoxos.mozilla.org.

We are getting very close to the launch time and there are plenty of launch campaign activities planned. The site readiness is also part of the plan.

thank you,
Peying

Comment 16

[Marcelo Araldi]

Hey Peying!
Everything looks fine to me! :)

Comment 17

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you Marcelo for the confirmation.  Since Marcelo did the localization, it would be nice if other community members can comment on this also.  Any additional review comments before we make it official?

Comment 18

[Reuben Morais [:reuben]]

What's up with "clients" being used everywhere? Is this targeted at enterprises? I don't really know where the source strings are…

Comment 19

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Reuben,

I mis-stated who did the translation and who did the review of the script. Fernando did the initial translation and first round of site review.  Marcelo did the 2nd review.  It appears that "cliente" is used for "customer".  The English source is in the original bug comment.  

Also if you want to do side by side review, you can open http://masterfirefoxos.mozilla.org. with a different window and choose US as the country, you can compare it that way.  The source file can be found in the original bug comment.

Thanks,
Peiying

Comment 20

[Reuben Morais [:reuben]]

(In reply to Peiying Mo from comment #19)
> I mis-stated who did the translation and who did the review of the script.
> Fernando did the initial translation and first round of site review. 
> Marcelo did the 2nd review.

Ok, sounds like this has been reviewed then.
 
> Also if you want to do side by side review, you can open
> http://masterfirefoxos.mozilla.org. with a different window and choose US as
> the country, you can compare it that way.

Sure, but then I have to navigate both pages, scroll both pages, etc etc.

> The source file can be found in the original bug comment.

This bug? Comment 0 only links to a some websites.

Comment 21

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Reuben, 

Several corrections on my part, this project has lasted for a long time while others projects came and finished...  For this one, the very initial translation was done by an agency, a decision made by community. Fernando did the initial round of review of the scripts (the scripts in the attachment section on top of comment 0).  After the site was put together, Marcelo did the review and put in comments. 

The comments were implemented, so this is the 2nd round of site review.  Let me know if we are good to sign off. It is good to have fresh pair of eyes checking it.  

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 22

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Are we good with this site as is?  Please confirm. If it is good to go, we can mark the bug as fixed.  Thank you!

Comment 23

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

marking it fixed.

Comment 24

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Marcelo ,

There is a change in the text for the web content (NOT the video script).  Look for the old text and replace with the translation for the new text:

OLD TEXT:  Use the awesome bar to enter website URL’s, perform searches, and access your browsing history
NEW TEXT: Use the URL bar to enter websites, perform searches and access your browsing history.

This particular feature is only true for desktop but not for FFOS.  This shows up on http://masterfirefoxos.mozilla.org/#m05/t05/p20 - text for the 3rd image of the slide

We will update the string as soon as you provide the new text.

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 25

[Marcelo Araldi]

Hi Peiying,
the new translation would be:

"Use a barra de endereços para acessar sites, fazer pesquisas e procurar em seu histórico de navegação."

Thank you!

Comment 26

[Marcelo Araldi]

Is this finished? Can we close it? :D

Comment 27

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thank you Marcelo.  We will revisit this site when we need to update to reflect new features.  Thank you!