Closed Bug 1016464 Opened 11 years ago Closed 10 years ago

"learn more" copy for new manifesto page

Categories

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Product:
Marketing
Component:
Copy
Type:
task
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
RESOLVED FIXED
Due Date:

People

(Reporter: jbertsch, Assigned: smartin)

References

Details

Stacy is working on Learn More text for each Manifesto principle: https://etherpad.mozilla.org/manifesto-relevantcontent Stacy - do you think we can have final content by this Friday?
Should this be assigned to Stacy? Is there anything for me to do here?
Yes, please assign to Stacy. Thanks, Matej!
Assignee: Mnovak → smartin
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
Blocks: 1016500
Let me know when the final copy on the etherpad is ready :)
Flags: needinfo?(smartin)
Just a quick update - hoping to review with Mitchell tomorrow early am. Back up plan is to review with her in SF on Monday.
Flags: needinfo?(smartin)
OK, thanks!
Update: Reviewing with Mitchell on Monday and updating the etherpad today. Here's the proposed approach for the "Learn More" content. Approach: focus on timeless content (so doesn't need to be updated frequently) -Web Literacy Competencies (one per principle) -Key MoCo/MoFo Projects (Open Badges, Webmaker, Lightbeam, DNT) -Key Blogs (Net Neutrality, Content Services, Privacy, Mitchell’s) -At least one key video per principle (Firefox YouTube Channel source) Mardi is going to reach out to the comms team to make sure we didn't miss anything. Should be final by Monday after I meet with Mitchell.
I've updated the content in https://etherpad.mozilla.org/manifesto-relevantcontent. There may be some changes on Monday after I review with Mitchell. I've also asked for feedback from the Comms team by Monday. Note that the Web Literacy Competencies are coming from MoFo. Per Michelle Thorne, the final URLs will be live on production end of next week, that's when we can share the definitive competency links. In the meantime, the staging ones are good for reviewing content.
Hi Stacy, any update on status of copy approval?
Flags: needinfo?(smartin)
Hi Mike, I met with Mitchell this afternoon. I need to update some of the copy. I'll be working on it on the train home today.
Flags: needinfo?(smartin)
Hi all - I think we're in pretty good shape for at least one video and at least one "Learn More" link for each principle. The etherpad is here (https://etherpad.mozilla.org/manifesto-relevantcontent), but if it's too difficult to read, let me know and I can drop the proposed content into a Google doc.
I still see the "Web literacy competency" language show up a number of times. I just want to make sure those are going to be rewritten. Thanks.
Yes, I will check with Michelle to see when their content will be live, so I grab some language from it.
Hi, the redesigned page have been pushed to a demo server: https://www-demo4.allizom.org/en-US/about/manifesto/ Please review the copy before it goes l10n. Thanks!
Thanks, Kohei! This is looking great. Hi Stacy- Thanks so much for collecting all this amazing content. It is super impressive! However, I'd like to remove the Australis videos from slides 6,7, and 9 because I think they are too internal-facing for this audience. And do you have an update on when the Mofo content links will be final?
It's looking great, but I'm concerned that it still says "Web literacy competency" in a number of them. We really shouldn't go live with that phrasing. Let's please make sure those get updated. Let's also add Johnathan's title after his quote and name in 02: VP Firefox Thanks.
(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #15) > It's looking great, but I'm concerned that it still says "Web literacy > competency" in a number of them. We really shouldn't go live with that > phrasing. Let's please make sure those get updated. > > Let's also add Johnathan's title after his quote and name in 02: VP Firefox > > Thanks. Thanks for reviewing Matej. And +1 re Johnathan's title. The "web literacy component" language still stands because we are waiting on Mofo to finalize their content on those pages - we'll have final text after we actually know what is on those pages :)
Added Johnathan's title; not yet pushed to a demo server though.
So how should I update the copy?
Hi Kohei- Stacy or I will post here in the bug to let you know when we have final copy. We are also working on getting permission from the folks in the photos to use their images. I'm guessing our live date will push out to something more like June 27. Is that still OK for you? Thx, Jen
Okay, that's fine with me :)
Hi Kohei- Final copy is ready here: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/spreadsheets/d/1INj90Nickvct7zDByVdCsLt8EnzmH-aDvMyli8QsZ_E/edit#gid=0 Let us know if you have any questions! Thx, Jen
Thanks! I'll update my pull request and get it pushed to a demo server.
One thing: I think this link is not correct: > Learn more about how to protect yourself online > https://webmaker.org/en-US/resources/literacy/weblit-Infrastructure
The final copy has been pushed to a demo server: https://www-demo4.allizom.org/en-US/about/manifesto/
So I guess the content is l10n-ready?
Flags: needinfo?(jbertsch)
Hi Kohei- Yes, I think we're ready to start L10N. I'll get a bug filed. Thx, Jen
Flags: needinfo?(jbertsch)
Hi Jen, There is a link labeled "Learn more about how to protect yourself online" on the spreadsheet, section 4, but I think the URL https://webmaker.org/en-US/resources/literacy/weblit-Infrastructure is wrong. Do you know the correct URL? (Sorry I should have asked this too with needinfo)
Flags: needinfo?(jbertsch)
(In reply to Kohei Yoshino [:kohei] from comment #27) > Hi Jen, > > There is a link labeled "Learn more about how to protect yourself online" on > the spreadsheet, section 4, but I think the URL > https://webmaker.org/en-US/resources/literacy/weblit-Infrastructure is > wrong. Do you know the correct URL? (Sorry I should have asked this too with > needinfo) Use this one instead: https://webmaker.org/en-US/resources/literacy/weblit-Security Good catch!
Flags: needinfo?(jbertsch)
(In reply to Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch] from comment #28) > Use this one instead: > https://webmaker.org/en-US/resources/literacy/weblit-Security Okay! I think the code is now ready.
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Closed: 10 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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