1020550 - Copy review for DBA Awards Submission

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[lfox]

Attachment: Mozilla@MWC13_DBA award submission.docx

Need time with Matej to review and write copy to support the joint 2LK / Mozilla entry submission for the Mozilla stand at MWC 2014. We are gathering further facts and metrics to support out application first thing next week. We will update Matej on Tuesday and ideally need the copy created by Friday am.

Copy attached is 2LK's first draft so needs direction from us before ready for wordsmithing, but wanted to schedule this in and get the request for support in. 

Cheers

Liza

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Thanks, Liza. Let me know when this is ready for me to look at.

Comment 2

[lfox]

Hi Matej,

It will probably be easier to work on this g doc version of the document: 
https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1w4O17DnIRDP_6lDdiZw5dKCCwZvf6V1U9ePDICaKMEM/edit

We are reaching out to BD to see if we can get a good stat / evidence to support it that shows that being at MWC had a direct impact on BD outcomes versus not being there. Will update the g doc with any new information asap. 
In the meantime, are you able to review this copy as if you were judging the award and amend it to how you feel it will best present the full story of what we achieved at MWC. Any other suggestions you feel should be included would be appreciated. 

The full MWC debrief doc is here which lists the show in numbers, the objectives and results etc: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/presentation/d/1WKy-f_XI77VKZ1xZMfJFW5hw-sy3R9RnfJ5qdGyObho/edit#slide=id.p89

The DBA entry pack for reference is here: http://www.effectivedesign.org.uk/node/98

Many thanks.

Liza

Comment 3

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Assigning this to Troy.

Troy, Liza is going to connect with you to see if you're free for a chat tomorrow. Please let me know if you have any questions once you've had a chance to connect with her.

Thanks.

Comment 4

[Troy Palmer]

Sounds good. Thanks, Matej.

Comment 5

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Good to close here?

Comment 6

[lfox]

Yes, many thanks Matej.