Closed Bug 1023432 Opened 11 years ago Closed 11 years ago

[marketing][screenshot][fr]: 1.3 launch campaign

Categories

(Mozilla Localizations :: fr / French, defect)

Product:
Mozilla Localizations
Component:
fr / French
Platform:
x86
macOS
Type:
defect
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: CocoMo, Assigned: tlow87)

References

Details

Hi French team, This set of screenshots will be used for various marketing and PR campaign initiatives. Based on our experience in 1.1 release, here are the steps in completing this project. Process: - localize the strings in the location specified below - graphic agency will take the strings to create screenshots - v1 - community will review the mock screenshots and provide corrections - corrections must be done in the localized strings; then add comments in this bug on the specific strings, the graphic agency knows where to fix it - graphic agency provides v2 for review for additional feedback - reiteration of input and implementations until we get them right. Reference material: 1). Screenshots 1.1 (de): https://mozilla.box.com/s/60aux05y0fa7g2d4fvv4 2). Screenshots 1.3 (en): https://mozilla.app.box.com/files/0/f/2028476680/EN 3). String source 1.3 (en): https://svn.mozilla.org/projects/l10n-misc/trunk/firefoxos-marketing/en-US/screenshots.lang 4). Dashboard: http://l10n.mozilla-community.org/~pascalc/langchecker/?locale=all&website=9&file=screenshots.lang One of the tricky parts in strings we need is the contact list: fake names of equal number of males and females; last names in consecutive order (such as f, g, h), and half of them have some kind of profession/company names associated with them. Since this is a brand new project for the French community. Don't hesitate to raise any questions you may have. Thank you, Peiying
Please assign task owner(s) so we can grant them permission to files in Box.
Hi Peiying, Please add Alizée (alizee.aubertin@gmail.com), Pascal (pascal@mozilla.com), and myself (theo@mozilla.com) to the Box repo. Thanks!
In addition to the three mentioned in comment #2, I have also added Nicolas nicolas.delebecque@gmail.com, Jean-Bernard goofy.bugzilla@gmail.com, Benoit benoit.leseul@gmail.com per Theo's request. If you don't have an account set up at Box, please do so. Let me know if you have access issues. Thanks, Peiying
Hi Localizers, Please try to complete this by next Monday. Let me know if you need more time.
Blocks: 1027408
Hi Team, can we get this done tomorrow morning PDT time. We are hitting some holidays in the US (July 4th) and in France (July 14 and the whole summer). The review and implementation cycle tends to take a lot of time to complete.
Initial translation is done, can anyone review it before I push to SVN? https://frenchmoz.etherpad.mozilla.org/ffox-campagne
Translation reviewed by Jean-Bernard, pushed in r129761.
Thank you Théo. Hi Tannie, The file is ready for you to start: http://viewvc.svn.mozilla.org/vc/projects/l10n-misc/trunk/firefoxos-marketing/fr/screenshots.lang?view=co. French needs to be completed by this Friday. Let's focus on this before we resume or start with any other language. Thank you, Peiying
Assignee: bugzilla.fr → tlow87
I'm on it. Thanks Peiying
First round of FR screens: https://mozilla.box.com/s/6v0lwr08k2xcn1zqklxu Notes/missing strings -- Screen 5: Social (we were thinking of revisiting this name since the icons aren't telephone apps), Games, Music, Showbiz Screen 7: I hid two street names that were in German from the map. If you have two French street names I can add them back. Screen 12: I capitalized the app names - let me know if they're correct. Screen 13: The contact screen has three consecutive letter sections on it, and it would be strange to jump from C to L in the list. Could you provide me with either one name last name beginning with 'E' or 'N'? Screen 18: Does the word 'Bytes' need to be changed?
Flags: needinfo?(pmo)
Hi Niran and Tannie, Can you send me a list of "revised" strings? We are still working against the old set and we want to put these strings in SVN, not in this bug. Theo, The first round of FR screens are ready for review. https://mozilla.box.com/s/6v0lwr08k2xcn1zqklxu. Please also address things needed and listed in comment #10
Flags: needinfo?(pmo)
Tannie, Theo and I couldn't see the screenshots. Could you give Theo access and make me a coowner of the folder? Thanks!
Hi Tannie, here are the requested strings + my feedback: Screen 14: Add back the space before "!", that's a French typographic rule. (After "revoir" and "déménage") Screen 12: Do not capitalize App names, leave them as it's in the SVN file. Screen 13: Woman name: "Laura Manceau" Man name: "Julien Masset" Screen 05: Social: Social Games: Jeux Music: Musique Showbiz: Divertissement Screen 03: "Chasse aux crevettes" should be "Camping sauvage" Screen 18: In this particular context only, "Usage" should be "Consommation". Also the units must be localized: 1 GB: 1 Go 200 MB: 200 Mo 0 Bytes: 0 octets 315 MB: 315 Mo 643.49 KB: 643.49 Ko (note that octet is not capitalized) Screen 7: Street names: "Rue du Chemin Vert" and "Rue Voltaire" Thanks!
(In reply to Théo Chevalier [:tchevalier] from comment #13) > Screen 13: > Woman name: "Laura Manceau" > Man name: "Julien Masset" Looking for one more name beginning with 'N'. I have two for L and M from the strings.
All other screens have been updated: https://mozilla.box.com/s/6v0lwr08k2xcn1zqklxu Just waiting on another surname beginning with 'N' to update Contacts screen.
(In reply to Tannie Low from comment #14) > (In reply to Théo Chevalier [:tchevalier] from comment #13) > > Screen 13: > > Woman name: "Laura Manceau" > > Man name: "Julien Masset" > > Looking for one more name beginning with 'N'. I have two for L and M from > the strings. Oops, misread, here is the name beginning with 'N': Justine Nicolas Additional feedback: Screen 05: Shows "Showbiz" instead of "Divertissement" (on the phone it's truncated, "Divertissem…") Screen 14: A space is still missing between "revoir' and "!" After the new names on screen 13, I think we'll be good! Thanks Tannie
Screens 5, 13 & 14 updated for review: https://mozilla.box.com/s/6v0lwr08k2xcn1zqklxu 5: Had to crank tracking down to -40 to fit 'Divertissem…'
Hi all, Thanks for the hard work getting this on time, as you know the deadline for this is end of day, can I share the JPG's with ZTE and advise that hi-res are coming soon, so they can at least see the assets we'll be delivering? Are these ready to be shared , QA'ed? Thanks
Hi, I took a look at all the screens, and they are ready to go, except for the Screen 13 (The Contacts one). Tannie, could you switch from "Justin Nicolas" to "Christophe Nerval" for the last contact please? I haven't realized the name was for a man. That would be the last change, thanks!
Done! We should be good to go.
Thank you! I'll share now, @ Tannie can we commit to Monday EOD CET to deliver hi-res PNG's?
(In reply to namir@mozilla.com from comment #21) > Thank you! > I'll share now, @ Tannie can we commit to Monday EOD CET to deliver hi-res > PNG's? Sure thing! I'll wait for a final approval response then get the exports going.
all files expect #10, browser start page are approved, John Slater commented that we are using older logo on browser start page. So in the interest of time, let's create the other ones as hi-res so I can provide ZTE access. Thanks
Just noticed the woman on screen 16 is the same as on screen 13, but doesn't have the same name. Also, on screen 13, "Lucie Libert" has a name beginning with "L" but is under the "M" section. What we could do: On screen 13: M ------------------------- Célia Mazet Journaliste ------------------------- Emma Morillon Pharmacienne Then screen 13 and 16 will match. Thanks!
D'oh! My apologies. Names fixed. Grabbed latest logo from firefoxosbrand.com / updated screen 13-Contacts & 17-StartPage. Images are hi-res JPGs like the others - let me know if you need something different!
Final check for L10n, looks good to me :)
Thanks Theo and Tannie for completing this at record time!
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 11 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
+1 Thank you!!
From Natalia who is in touch with the partner, "screenshots have been provided in French (but not in right screen size 4", 4:3 format). to be updated." Is that something you are aware of?
Status: RESOLVED → REOPENED
Resolution: FIXED → ---
Yes, Theo, Natalia informed us that the screen of the ZTE open C is different (4"), Tannie is working to update the screens. Thanks!
(In reply to namir@mozilla.com from comment #31) > Yes, Theo, Natalia informed us that the screen of the ZTE open C is > different (4"), Tannie is working to update the screens. > Thanks! Perfect, thanks, just wanted to be sure everyone was on the same page. Closing the bug since this is not l10n related.
Status: REOPENED → RESOLVED
Closed: 11 years ago → 11 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Revised 1280 x 2133 screens: https://mozilla.box.com/s/6v0lwr08k2xcn1zqklxu
Status: RESOLVED → REOPENED
Resolution: FIXED → ---
Thanks Tannie! Natalia, are the new screenshots okay for the partner?
Flags: needinfo?(nwinter)
I just sent the files to them. I think it's night now in France so let's see tomorrow... thanks
Flags: needinfo?(nwinter)
NIT: Tiny typo on https://app.box.com/files/0/f/2137266958/1/f_18867667939 "Oliver Petit" vs. "Olivier Petit") (+ The text should be "Besoin d’aide" for consistency, but that's not a big deal)
Thanks again everyone. Close the bug now.
Status: REOPENED → RESOLVED
Closed: 11 years ago → 11 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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