Closed Bug 1069550 Opened 10 years ago Closed 10 years ago

Build static page for webmaker sign-up funnel (after pledge to teach)

Categories

(Webmaker Graveyard :: welcome.webmaker.org, defect)

x86
macOS
defect
Not set
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: adam, Assigned: akirose)

References

Details

(Whiteboard: [Oct3])

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(2 files, 1 obsolete file)

After users 'pledge to teach' on this page:
https://welcome.webmaker.org/pledge/teach-the-web/

We should show a simple thank you page. This new page is what we need to build.

This is a static page including the copy of the recent 'pledge follow up email':
https://foundation.etherpad.mozilla.org/pledgetoteachemail

If we build this on welcome.webmaker.org we can also run further A/B tests on the content to learn which asks work best for new users.

The three options that link out to activities can include a simple image. We can link to the existing hosted content at this stage.

We should also include a 'not now thanks, skip to site' link in smaller copy at the bottom. The link on the pledge page works really well (high conversion to primary ask and very little bounce).
Blocks: 1069555
Is this copy final?
No longer blocks: 1069555
Flags: needinfo?(hannah)
Flags: needinfo?(andrea)
Blocks: 1069555
Aki: yes the copy is final. We'll need to add the "not now..." language Adam suggests. Let's use this: 

"No thanks, I just want to look around."
Should the page include the signature from Amira? That part seems a little weird to me, otherwise I think the copy works as a stand-alone page.
Flags: needinfo?(hannah)
Hannah/Aki: No. Should have made that clear. Should remove the salutation and signature for the webpage version of this.
Actually, could someone do me a favor and paste in the copy we want on this bug? Don't worry about formatting, I can copy that from the etherpad. I just noticed that there are several emails there, not sure which to grab!
Flags: needinfo?(andrea)
Welcome to Mozilla Webmaker! Thank you for joining us and pledging to teach the Web. It's going to be easier and  more fun than you think! 

To get started, just gather a group of interested kids or adults together, and choose from the three activities below. Each one contains everything you need to teach a little something about how the Web works.

Activity 1: YouTube Karaoke. Participants will pick their favorite song from YouTube, lip-sync their own version on camera, and mash the two together to create their very own music video. Who knows? Maybe you'll discover the next YouTube sensation. [link: https://blog.webmaker.org/music_video]

Activity 2: Hack Your High School. Get a group of youth together to remix their schools’ web site. With  our Xray Goggles tool, it's as easy as going to a school's website and changing some text to announce Summer's coming early or adding an image  making Justin Bieber the new school mascot. [link: https://blog.webmaker.org/hack-your-school] 

Activity 3: Private Eye. Participants will create their own Wizard of Oz moment by pulling back the curtain to see who's watching us on the Web. Turn on our Lightbeam tool, visit a handful of websites, and reveal who's tracking you. You'll never look at the Web the same way again. [link: https://laura.makes.org/thimble/lightbeam-activity]

We are so glad you joined the Webmaker community and have taken the pledge to teach the Web. Feel free to email or tweet to @webmaker if you have any questions. We're looking forward to seeing what you create! 


No thanks, I just want to look around.
Attached image sv12c.png (obsolete) —
How does this look?
Attachment #8491840 - Flags: feedback?(paulj)
Attachment #8491840 - Flags: feedback?(hannah)
Attachment #8491840 - Flags: feedback?(adam)
Looks so pretty!

But now that I see it as a web page, I'm thinking we need to cut out about half the words. Curious if others agree.
I think fewer words or more images (like, an image per activity or something? not sure)
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
Attached image ybouk.png
Attachment #8491840 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Attachment #8491840 - Flags: feedback?(paulj)
Attachment #8491840 - Flags: feedback?(hannah)
Attachment #8491840 - Flags: feedback?(adam)
Attachment #8491849 - Flags: feedback?(paulj)
Attachment #8491849 - Flags: feedback?(hannah)
Comment on attachment 8491849 [details]
ybouk.png

What about this for some trimmed down text?
Like!
+1
Attachment #8491849 - Flags: feedback?(paulj)
Attachment #8491849 - Flags: feedback?(hannah)
Attachment #8491881 - Flags: review?(kate) → review+
Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-landing-pages

https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-landing-pages/commit/5c7090734df66db3df89c8f325a21ef25c772e46
Bug 1069550 - Build static page for webmaker sign-up funnel (after
pledge to teach)

https://github.com/mozilla/webmaker-landing-pages/commit/9c0117462558737d5ac31dcf7184ed725eabb712
Merge pull request #81 from gesa/1069550/thank-you

Fixes Bug 1069550 - Build static page for webmaker sign-up funnel (after pledge to teach)
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Closed: 10 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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