Closed Bug 1075156 Opened 10 years ago Closed 10 years ago

MozFest 2014 Fringe events page: Write page copy

Categories

(Mozilla Foundation Communications :: Website, task)

x86
macOS
task
Not set
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: erikad, Assigned: sarah)

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Details

(Whiteboard: [studio mofo][mozfest][comms])

Please write first draft copy of text for Fringe Events page, then assign to me (ErikaD) for copy editing. I'll pass off to Mavis for implementation on page.
Sarah, I condensed the Fringe Events copy as we discussed in today's call, plus I added a date range. Does this seem right? Also, I took out the line about "we reserve the right not to publish your Fringe Event" as it sounded a bit unfriendly. If you think that will be an issue, I can easily add it back in.

If this looks good to you, Mavis can implement.

Thanks!
Flags: needinfo?(sarah)
Hi
This all looks great.
I agree about the unfriendly piece, was not sure if we needed but happy to leave it out.

Date range makes sense

Thanks
Sarah
Flags: needinfo?(sarah)
We also need to include a privacy policy checkbox.  Erika, could you add copy to the Etherpad when you get a chance?  Thanks!
Flags: needinfo?(erikad)
Yup! Updated.
Flags: needinfo?(erikad)
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 10 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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