1099465 - Mozilla.org Hello Copy - /whatsnew, /firstrun, Post Tour

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Copy creation for the post tour page. This page will be presented to a user when they've completed the Hello tours.

Project Wiki: https://wiki.mozilla.org/Websites/Mozilla.org/Hello/Onboarding

Comment 1

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Removing as a blocker for GA 35. Still a possibility for GA 36.

Comment 2

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

/whatsnew deck: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/16h6HCsyDPUEp_57u3TsRkt6EkQbs_WReiUwMe0sjeYg/edit
/firstrun deck: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1hd-c1_AidElEGrajqHdpmLlceOqOv6Yt-dqCftdvz-E/edit

Comment 3

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

This copy has gone through legal review (bug 1113414), and is now final approved.

Comment 4

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Hi Matej - quick copy related question for /whatsnew:

A: Hello icon exists in Toolbar or Menu and user has never created a conversation

Bullet point is: "Start a video conversation with a single click"

B: Hello icon is not in Toolbar or Menu and user has never created a conversation

Bullet point is: "Open a video conversation with a single click"

Is this small difference intentional? 

It seems the tour copy itself is identical for both A & B, with the exception of this single word. While it seems like a trivial thing, the code required to conditionally show different copy based on icon visibility is actually pretty considerable.

I think this is most likely a typo/mistake, but thought I'd best double check.

Thanks

Comment 5

[Troy Palmer]

Hey Alex

Good catch. They should be both "start". I've updated the g-doc as well.

Thanks,
Troy

(In reply to Alex Gibson [:agibson] from comment #4)
> Hi Matej - quick copy related question for /whatsnew:
> 
> A: Hello icon exists in Toolbar or Menu and user has never created a
> conversation
> 
> Bullet point is: "Start a video conversation with a single click"
> 
> B: Hello icon is not in Toolbar or Menu and user has never created a
> conversation
> 
> Bullet point is: "Open a video conversation with a single click"
> 
> Is this small difference intentional? 
> 
> It seems the tour copy itself is identical for both A & B, with the
> exception of this single word. While it seems like a trivial thing, the code
> required to conditionally show different copy based on icon visibility is
> actually pretty considerable.
> 
> I think this is most likely a typo/mistake, but thought I'd best double
> check.
> 
> Thanks

Comment 6

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Thanks, Troy!

Clearing needs info