1112871 - Copy For MasterFirefox OS HP

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

This bug captures the copy needed for the masterfirefox os homepage.

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Here's a first pass at this (the intro copy comes from the master document):

Welcome To Firefox OS!
Welcome to the Firefox OS global partner and community training hub. Here you’ll find everything you need to learn to communicate the basics of Firefox OS. Select any topic to get started.

Demo Tips
Learn how to show off and talk about the key features and benefits of Firefox OS to your customers.

Customer Guide
See how Firefox OS fits into your customers' lives, no matter who they are or where they're from.

Key Features
Discover what makes Firefox OS the most unique and exciting mobile operating system.

FAQ
Still have questions? Not for long! Find all the answers you're looking for here.

Quizzes
Put your new knowledge to the test with this series of fun, interactive quizzes.

Comment 2

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

Natalia - any comments on this copy? If not we can consider it final.

Comment 3

[Natalia Martinez-Winter]

+1 !

Comment 4

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

I just entered this content into our CMS and realized we are missing one blurb. The blurb for the introduction.

You can see the blurb missing from Introduction in the upper left.
https://prod.masterfirefoxos.com/en/1-3T/

Content for that page is:
https://prod.masterfirefoxos.com/en/1-3T/introduction/

Apologies for not catching sooner.

Comment 5

[Jennifer Balaco]

Setting a need info for Matej to make sure he sees this.

Comment 6

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Ben (:bensternthal) from comment #4)
> I just entered this content into our CMS and realized we are missing one
> blurb. The blurb for the introduction.
> 
> You can see the blurb missing from Introduction in the upper left.
> https://prod.masterfirefoxos.com/en/1-3T/

Looking at that page, we're also missing blurbs for "The Firefox mission" (which should actually say Mozilla instead of Firefox) and "Take the challenge." Do we still need those? Or are they coming from somewhere else? (We could probably use the "Quizzes" copy from comment 1 for "Take the challenge.")

Here's some copy for the introduction section:

Find out what makes Firefox OS perfect for new smartphone users by giving them just what they need.

Let's also shorten the blurb at the very top:

"Welcome to the Firefox OS global partner and community training hub. Select any topic to get started."


> Content for that page is:
> https://prod.masterfirefoxos.com/en/1-3T/introduction/

I see that this content relates to the 1.3 version of the operating system. Will there also be a 2.0 version? I ask because the OS is quite different and we just finalized that copy. We won't be able to just reuse what's there now.

There's also an old Firefox logo on this page. Let's update that and make sure we don't have any others on the site.

One other thing: Please put all the headlines/subheads throughout the site in sentence case.

Thanks.

Comment 7

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

1. Missing Blurb "Mission" -> this will become the about page and does not need a blurb.
2. Missing Blurb "Challenge" -> could not add due to bug, will add.
3. Supplied intro copy -> I will add (many thanks)
4. Shorten top blurb -> I will do.
5. Yep we will have sep copy for 2.0, natalia and diane are entering now
6. Logo -> i will update
7. Sentence case -> i will update, this was imported from the old site.

I think that's all!

Comment 8

[Ben (:bensternthal)]

Matej - note in the original mockup from lee there was a big headline "Welcome to Firefox OS!"

https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1112864

Should we have that or toss it? Side note..Craig likes how the big header looks.

Comment 9

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Ben (:bensternthal) from comment #8)
> Matej - note in the original mockup from lee there was a big headline
> "Welcome to Firefox OS!"
> 
> https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1112864
> 
> Should we have that or toss it? Side note..Craig likes how the big header
> looks.

The big header with the additional headline?

If we're using that, then I would change the copy again:

This global partner and community training hub has everything you need to effectively communicate the basics of Firefox OS. Select any topic top get started.

Comment 10

[Craig Cook (:craigcook)]

So we'll stick with the headline "Welcome to Firefox OS"? With or without exclamation? Any concerns about repeating "Firefox OS" when it's right next to the wordmark?

Comment 11

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Craig Cook (:craigcook) from comment #10)
> So we'll stick with the headline "Welcome to Firefox OS"? With or without
> exclamation? Any concerns about repeating "Firefox OS" when it's right next
> to the wordmark?

Good point. Maybe it should just say "Welcome!" (with exclamation mark).