Advocacy: Finalize NN Petition copy

RESOLVED FIXED

Status

Mozilla Foundation Communications
Copy Editing and Review
RESOLVED FIXED
4 years ago
4 years ago

People

(Reporter: Erika Drushka, Assigned: Erika Drushka)

Tracking

(Blocks: 1 bug)

Details

(Whiteboard: [studio mofo][advocacy][NN2015])

(Assignee)

Description

4 years ago
Let's use this bug to note when Petition/Landing Page has been reviewed and all sign offs are complete.

Copy here: https://docs.google.com/a/mozillafoundation.org/document/d/1P-AAaD3TJSmJXmuwObIE51Qrl7ftdApiioE2cSuGOW4/edit
(Assignee)

Comment 1

4 years ago
Need to finalize:
1) Petition copy
2) Background/context copy
3) Copy above input fields (If you live or vote in the United States, please add your name to the petition using the form below (if not, please forward this to anyone you know in the U.S.A.)
4) Privacy Policy checkbox text
5) Button text
Flags: needinfo?(andrea)
(Assignee)

Comment 2

4 years ago
Using this for reference until new mockup is complete: https://sendto.mozilla.org/page/s/protect-net-neutrality?source=mozadvocacy
(Assignee)

Updated

4 years ago
Blocks: 1121783
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Updated

4 years ago
Blocks: 1121784
Geoffrey and Denelle approved this language, it is final (the letter, and description):
https://docs.google.com/a/mozillafoundation.org/document/d/1P-AAaD3TJSmJXmuwObIE51Qrl7ftdApiioE2cSuGOW4/edit
Flags: needinfo?(andrea)
1) Petition copy (see comment 3)
2) Background/context copy (see comment 3)
3) Copy above input fields (If you live or vote in the United States, please add your name to the petition using the form below (if not, please forward this to anyone you know in the U.S.A.) -- please keep this copy as-is
4) Privacy Policy checkbox text (this copy stays exactly as it is on the current NN action)
5) Button text (let's adapt what Avaaz does on their button: [Send >] here's a screenshot: http://note.io/1u5SndV

Comment 5

4 years ago
Hello Erika,

I'm about to start building the petition page.  Could we close this ticket if copy is settled?  I'll use comment 3 & comment 4 as reference for build(https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1121784).
Flags: needinfo?(erikad)
(Assignee)

Comment 6

4 years ago
I reviewed copy in Gdoc and on Redpen. They should now be the same (so pull from the GDoc).

https://docs.google.com/a/mozillafoundation.org/document/d/1P-AAaD3TJSmJXmuwObIE51Qrl7ftdApiioE2cSuGOW4/edit
https://redpen.io/ksae2825faa5f456b7
Flags: needinfo?(erikad)
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Updated

4 years ago
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 4 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
(Assignee)

Updated

4 years ago
Blocks: 1125438
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