1131111 - PN Changes (Snippets/SMS Campaign, default Search provider, and SSL Error reporting)

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Privacy Graveyard :: Privacy Policies, task, P1)

Description

[Geoff Piper]

Three revisions to the Fx Desktop PN:
(1) Snippets/SMS Campaign
(2) Default Search provider, and 
(3) SSL Error reporting

https://github.com/GeoffPiperMZ/legal-docs/commit/f7a5ad3ac4299456d742981b96b16b6cc01bb20b

Comment 1

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Geoff, please assign the bug to me once content update is complete.  Thank you!

Comment 2

[Geoff Piper]

Jen, Mike, Kohei...what's the status of this change to the PN? The Snippets campaign goes live February 12 btw. Can we get this live for that?

Comment 3

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Attachment: pull request

Sent a pull request. The changes should be live tomorrow.

Comment 4

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Geoff: can you please send a pull request to mozilla/legal-docs as before, so that we can merge the changes into mozilla/bedrock (www.mozilla.org). Thanks!

Comment 5

[Geoff Piper]

I sent a pull request. Not sure if this accomplished what you need now. This is urgent. Sorry, but tings seemed very different this time. Not a Git Hub expert ;)

Comment 6

[Geoff Piper]

I started over, made the changes again, and created a new pull request: https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/pull/288

Comment 7

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

I r+'d Geoff's PR. :kohei, can we merge/push today?

Comment 8

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Looks like people are busy migrating to Python 2.7 today. Once everything goes well, I'll ping someone on IRC.

Comment 9

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/f9849c7955026cc011fbc8534ee91207f904bfd0
Fix Bug 1131111 - PN Changes (Snippets/SMS Campaign, default Search provider, and SSL Error reporting)

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/e77deed3611f5ff8a6f50656b5baebdbc8fed7c9
Merge pull request #2720 from kyoshino/bug-1131111-privacy-notice-updates

Fix Bug 1131111 - PN Changes (Snippets/SMS Campaign, default Search provider, and SSL Error reporting)

Comment 10

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

The changes are now on production.

Comment 11

[Geoff Piper]

Great! Assigning to Peiying now for localization

Comment 12

[Geoff Piper]

Kohei, it came to my attention that there is a hard return missing in the newly added Default Search aspect to these changes we made to the privacy notice. "Default Search" needs to be on its own line as the bullet (just as "Tiles" is above it), with a hard return so the paragraph starts on its own new line.

Can we arrange for that to be fixed asap?
~GP

Comment 13

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Hi Geoff-

Do you need this done today?  We usually don't push to product on Friday afternoons.  Could this wait until Monday?

Thanks,
Jen

Comment 14

[Geoff Piper]

Monday is fine ;)

Comment 15

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Thanks!

Comment 16

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

We just completed translation for this update.  Is it a change that impacts other languages or just English?

Comment 17

[Geoff Piper]

Its actually a formatting correcting, no changes to any words at all.