1131259 - Copy for Mozilla.org iOS CTA updates and signup landing page

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Description

[Mike Alexis [:malexis]]

Notes from Feb 3 check-in.

https://etherpad.mozilla.org/ios-3feb2015

Schedule:

https://app.smartsheet.com/b/publish?EQBCT=b6b2e128e5664e1d985f7510436275aa

Wireframes:
https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1126578#c2

Comment 1

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Assigning to Troy.

Holly, would you be able to meet with Troy and take him through the wireframes?

Comment 2

[Holly Habstritt Gaal [:Habber]]

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #1)
> Assigning to Troy.
> 
> Holly, would you be able to meet with Troy and take him through the
> wireframes?

Meeting invite sent.

Comment 3

[Troy Palmer]

Hey Holly 

I haven't seen a meeting invite. Can you try re-sending it? Or letting me know what time you had in mind?

Thanks,
Troy

(In reply to Holly Habstritt Gaal [:Habber] from comment #2)
> (In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #1)
> > Assigning to Troy.
> > 
> > Holly, would you be able to meet with Troy and take him through the
> > wireframes?
> 
> Meeting invite sent.

Comment 4

[Troy Palmer]

Hey everyone

Here is the link to my copy deck:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qJd6RTQWikaDfT0BTccoybr8VZwHEDeBVeTjcqXN_M/edit?usp=sharing

Let me know if there are any questions.

Thanks,
Troy

Comment 5

[Stephanie Hobson [:shobson]]

We will need a page title and page description for sign-up interaction page. Is this right place to ask for that?

Comment 6

[Troy Palmer]

Not entirely sure. Matej?

Comment 7

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Troy Palmer from comment #6)
> Not entirely sure. Matej?

I'd say this is the right place.

The title will probably be something like: Firefox on iOS — Sign up for email updates — Mozilla

And the description can be "Sign up today to receive email updates about the iOS version of Firefox."

Troy, you OK with those?

Comment 8

[Troy Palmer]

Looks good to me. Thanks.

Comment 9

[Jennifer Bertsch [:jbertsch]]

Is this copy final and approved?

Comment 10

[Jennifer Balaco]

Doing some bug clean-up. Can this bug be resolved?

Comment 11

[Jennifer Balaco]

I'm going to resolve this bug. Please reopen if there are additional copy needs. Thanks.