Closed Bug 1132231 Opened 9 years ago Closed 9 years ago

Copy for Webmaker "Teach the Web" tile on moz.org homepage

Categories

(Marketing :: Copy, task)

Product:
Marketing
Component:
Copy
Platform:
x86
macOS
Type:
task
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
RESOLVED FIXED

People

(Reporter: malexis, Assigned: matej)

References

Details

Project will consist of updated messaging for current "Teach the Web" tile featured on mozilla.org. 

Paul to supply messaging direction by end of week (2/13).
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
Ping! Got a line of text for this one?
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
(In reply to Craig Cook (:craigcook) from comment #1)
> Ping! Got a line of text for this one?

Still waiting on direction from Paul.

Have anything for us?
Flags: needinfo?(matej) → needinfo?(paulj)
Sorry, all. Lagging on this and behind. I'll aim to have you something by end of day tomorrow, 2/19.
Flags: needinfo?(paulj)
Hi all,

Here's where Paul and I landed on replacement copy for the two tiles. The first, larger tile can read:

Make the Web you want
Build a webpage or app in minutes — no coding required
Visit webmaker.org

And the shorter, second tile can read:

Learn the Web

Matej and all: Open to your suggestions, edits, etc.
(In reply to Kevin Zawacki from comment #4)
> Hi all,
> 
> Here's where Paul and I landed on replacement copy for the two tiles. The
> first, larger tile can read:
> 
> Make the Web you want
> Build a webpage or app in minutes — no coding required
> Visit webmaker.org
> 
> And the shorter, second tile can read:
> 
> Learn the Web
> 
> Matej and all: Open to your suggestions, edits, etc.

Thanks. Just small style edits from me:

Make the Web you want
Build a Web page or app in minutes — no coding required.
Visit webmaker.org

How would you feel about keeping the CTA as "Become a Webmaker"? It feels more action-oriented to me than just asking someone to go to a site.
Hi Matej, OK on all accounts! Thanks for the edits. 
If I can help with anything further, just let me know.
(In reply to Kevin Zawacki from comment #6)
> Hi Matej, OK on all accounts! Thanks for the edits. 
> If I can help with anything further, just let me know.

Will do. Thanks.

Craig, anything else you need?
Flags: needinfo?(craigcook.bugz)
All set, thanks!
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Closed: 9 years ago
Flags: needinfo?(craigcook.bugz)
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/41c8b12cf4632a5ff87d8ae231d1cb86ba896332
Bug 1132231 - fix copy for Webmaker and Hello promos

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/87b2a34b30b075d0acbb6a66d3a671745ff91db3
Merge pull request #2773 from craigcook/bug-1132231-home-promo-copy-fixes

Bug 1132231 - fix copy for Webmaker and Hello promos
The new tile looks great!

Were you interested in replacing the copy for the second, smaller Webmaker tile, too? ("Build an app in seconds.")

Paul and I have language prepared if that's the case.
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