1168460 - [fr] Localization of Infographic about Suggested Tiles

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: fr / French, defect)

Description

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

An infographic was created in English about Suggested Tiles to explain how data are managed
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B19__hKNwbafZU1mZDFtam5oc1U/edit

Since there's going to be a lot of attention around this subject in the next weeks, we'd like to localize it in a few key locales.

I created a .lang file with the strings
https://svn.mozilla.org/projects/l10n-misc/trunk/firefoxtiles/fr/suggestedtiles_infographic.lang

Once the file is translated, Aaron will create the graphic file and the localization team will be able to review the final result.

Please let us know if you think that you won't be able to work on this, since we'll need to figure out an alternative way to localize the strings.

Comment 1

[Théo Chevalier]

Hi,

we can handle this translation request.

Btw, the English graphic is already used by French tech news websites http://www.nextinpact.com/news/95197-la-publicite-debarque-dans-firefox-beta-cette-semaine.htm

Comment 2

[Théo Chevalier]

Hi, fr translation is available here, let us know if you need anything else: http://viewvc.svn.mozilla.org/vc/projects/l10n-misc/trunk/firefoxtiles/fr/suggestedtiles_infographic.lang?view=co

Comment 3

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Aaron, French should be good to start.

File is available in multiple formats.

Source (only French)
http://svn.mozilla.org/projects/l10n-misc/trunk/firefoxtiles/fr/suggestedtiles_infographic.lang

Web page (all locales)
https://l10n.mozilla-community.org/~pascalc/langchecker/?website=10&file=suggestedtiles_infographic.lang&action=translate&show

Comment 4

[Aaron]

Thank you. I'll start on this next week.

Comment 5

[Aaron]

The following translation string is missing:
"Aggregate totals reported:"

You can reply directly to this bug with the translation, if that makes things easier.

Thanks

Comment 6

[Théo Chevalier]

(In reply to Aaron from comment #5)
> The following translation string is missing:
> "Aggregate totals reported:"
> 
> You can reply directly to this bug with the translation, if that makes
> things easier.
> 
> Thanks

Indeed, it's missing in the .lang file. You can use "Sommes du rapport :".

Thanks

Comment 7

[Aaron]

Attachment: How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf

French translation complete!

Please review to make sure I flowed everything in correctly.

Comment 8

[Théo Chevalier]

(In reply to Aaron from comment #7)
> Created attachment 8613705 [details]
> How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf
> 
> French translation complete!
> 
> Please review to make sure I flowed everything in correctly.

Looks good to me, except "1st" that's still in English. I guess "Directe" doesn't fit? Not sure what we can use instead. "1er" doesn't have much sense here, since we're talking about "direct connection" and "direct cookie".

Comment 9

[Théo Chevalier]

"Direct", not "Directe"

Comment 10

[Aaron]

Attachment: How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf

Fixed.

Is this better?

Comment 11

[Aaron]

Attachment: How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf

...just saw the additional comment. Directe is now Direct.

Comment 12

[Théo Chevalier]

Comment on attachment 8613721 [details]
How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf

Thanks Aaron, and sorry for the extra pain ;)

Comment 13

[Théo Chevalier]

Comment on attachment 8613722 [details]
How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf

Woops, r+ed the wrong one. I should go to bed…

Comment 14

[Jean-Bernard Marcon]

(nitpicking suggestions @tchevalier)
J'aurais dû proposer un peu plus tôt mais ce n'est qu'en visualisant le résultat dans l'infographie que les choses sont plus nettes.

1.
Les vignettes suggérées fonctionnent par le biais d’un système de recommandations qui agit pour l’utilisateur, fournissant du contenu pertinent en respectant sa vie privée.
> Les vignettes suggérées fonctionnent par le biais d’un système de recommandations qui agit pour l’utilisateur et lui fournit du contenu pertinent dans le respect de sa vie privée.
* pour éviter les -ant -en -ant du deuxième membre de phrase

2. 
Voici son principe de fonctionnement : Nous ne 
> Voici son principe de fonctionnement : nous ne 
(pas de maj derrière deux-points)

C'est tout :)

Comment 15

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to Théo Chevalier [:tchevalier] from comment #6)
> Indeed, it's missing in the .lang file. You can use "Sommes du rapport :".

Semicolon failure fixed in r141985.

Comment 16

[Théo Chevalier]

@Aaron, Hi, if it's still possible to do edits (otherwise it's no big deal), Jean-Bernard found two little things to fix in this big chunk of text:

Suggested tiles are powered by a recommendation system that acts on behalf of the user, delivering relevance while respecting privacy. Here is basically how it works: We only send a limited amount of data back to our tiles selection server, Onyx, and store that raw data in our storage and analysis server, Disco, for a short period of time before aggregating it in our data warehouse. High-level aggregate reports are then shared with our partners.

Here's the fixed translation:

Les vignettes suggérées fonctionnent par le biais d’un système de recommandations qui agit pour l’utilisateur et lui fournit du contenu pertinent dans le respect de sa vie privée. Voici son principe de fonctionnement : nous ne renvoyons qu’une quantité limitée de données à notre serveur de sélection de vignettes, Onyx. Ces données sont ensuite stockées de manière brute sur notre serveur de stockage et d’analyse, Disco, durant une courte période avant de les agréger dans nos entrepôts de données. Ces agrégats de haut niveau sont ensuite partagés avec nos partenaires.


Thanks

Comment 17

[Aaron]

Attachment: How_Data_is_Shared_INFOGRAPHIC_Fr.pdf

Here is the updated Fr translation.

Comment 18

[Théo Chevalier]

Perfect, thanks! I'd say this time we're good to go.