1172111 - Copy for remote tabs panel

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Firefox for iOS :: General, defect)

Description

[Stefan Arentz | :st3fan | ⏰ EST | he/him]

There are three strings that need proper copy:

* You currently don't have any other devices connected to Firefox Sync.
* You currently don't have any other devices tabs open on your other Firefox-enabled devices.
* There was a problem fetching tabs from the cloud. Please try again in a few moments.

These are in RemoteTabsPanel.swift

Comment 1

[Stefan Arentz | :st3fan | ⏰ EST | he/him]

Matej, here are a few more. These are all error messages which are presented like:

https://mozilla.invisionapp.com/share/VA2JQLFJ7#/screens/70030935?maintainScrollPosition=false

Comment 2

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Stefan Arentz [:st3fan] from comment #0)
> There are three strings that need proper copy:
> 
> * You currently don't have any other devices connected to Firefox Sync.

"You don't have any other devices connected to this Firefox Account available to sync."

We're starting to expose Accounts more to users and we try to avoid "Firefox Sync" whenever possible.


> * You currently don't have any other devices tabs open on your other
> Firefox-enabled devices.

"You don't have any tabs open in Firefox on your other devices."


> * There was a problem fetching tabs from the cloud. Please try again in a
> few moments.

"There was a problem accessing tabs from your other devices. Try again in a few moments."

Both "fetching" and "cloud" feel a bit too technical.

Comment 3

[Stefan Arentz | :st3fan | ⏰ EST | he/him]

https://github.com/mozilla/firefox-ios/commit/f428f44068300c3548195c9ae63432fe3c0505fd