1189927 - Content updates need to be made on the FxOS FAQ page: https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/os/faq

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Vik]

Some of the content needs to be updated to reflect current state of FxOS products (e.g. removal of references to "adaptive app search").  The Product Marketing team will provide content changes (link or doc for proposed changes to be provided shortly).

Comment 1

[Mike Alexis [:malexis]]

Hey Vik, any word on timing for getting content to update this?

Comment 2

[Vik]

Hi Mike,

I was just about to send an update.  We have the new content ready.  It's here:

https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1ucvtnDli2kzTiccSOGhWIWJNf5rO2z1F9aDrRpN1Ol4/edit?usp=sharing 


Let me know your feedback or if there are any questions...

Comment 3

[Malena Andrade [:malenita]]

(In reply to Vik from comment #2)
> Hi Mike,
> 
> I was just about to send an update.  We have the new content ready.  It's
> here:
> 
> https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/
> 1ucvtnDli2kzTiccSOGhWIWJNf5rO2z1F9aDrRpN1Ol4/edit?usp=sharing 
> 
> 
> Let me know your feedback or if there are any questions...

Hi Vik,

I've been assigned to update this page and found a few minor issues in the copy. I've commented within the doc.

Thanks!

Comment 4

[Vik]

Thanks for those corrections Malena!  I'll look into the dead link you pointed out on Monday and try to resolve it (looks like we just need to point to a different SUMO page on that one). 

--Vik

Comment 5

[Vik]

Let's use the link that's currently being used in the FAQ page for that specific topic:  https://support.mozilla.org/kb/make-calls-and-access-voicemail-firefox-os 

I commented in the doc as well.  Thanks!

Comment 6

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Can we start localization of the new content or do you need to verify the page on a demo server? Note that once we start localization, you won't be able to change strings freely.

One question on the current text. Example: "Check out the device market availability at https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/os/devices/."

Is it really wanted to have a URL in the middle of the sentence, instead of words, e.g. "Check out the device market availability in the <a>devices page</a>."?

Comment 7

[Vik]

Adding Joni and Peiying on cc

Comment 8

[Vik]

Hi Francesco,

I think we're ready now.  Joni has helped update the SUMO links and has added some comments to the working doc (linked above), and I don't believe there are any other changes we need to do at this point.  

I agree--it would look a little cleaner to embed hyperlinks in the text rather than write out the whole URL.  Is there anyone on here that would advise against having embedded URL's for any reason? 


Thanks.

Comment 9

[Malena Andrade [:malenita]]

(In reply to Vik from comment #8)
> Hi Francesco,
> 
> I think we're ready now.  Joni has helped update the SUMO links and has
> added some comments to the working doc (linked above), and I don't believe
> there are any other changes we need to do at this point.  
> 
> I agree--it would look a little cleaner to embed hyperlinks in the text
> rather than write out the whole URL.  Is there anyone on here that would
> advise against having embedded URL's for any reason? 
> 
> 
> Thanks.

Hi Vik,

There is just one more url that needs to be confirmed in copy. I have made the comments in the doc. I am changing the link to have an embedded url instead of url being written out. Please confirm on these two things and the PR should be ready for review.

Thanks!

Comment 10

[Vik]

Hi Malena,

If I follow the comments chain correctly, is it the "Use the Internet" one you're waiting for?  I think Joni has provided the link above in a previous comment.  She's provided this one:

https://support.mozilla.org/kb/visit-websites-firefox-os

Does that seem right?  Looks like the right one to me. 


--Vik

Comment 11

[Malena Andrade [:malenita]]

(In reply to Vik from comment #10)
> Hi Malena,
> 
> If I follow the comments chain correctly, is it the "Use the Internet" one
> you're waiting for?  I think Joni has provided the link above in a previous
> comment.  She's provided this one:
> 
> https://support.mozilla.org/kb/visit-websites-firefox-os
> 
> Does that seem right?  Looks like the right one to me. 
> 
> 
> --Vik

Great! Yes she provided two links and I wasn't sure which one. Thanks for confirming!

Malena

Comment 12

[[github robot]]

Commits pushed to master at https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/6bdd4acbd1ef051ad08f7960b44d66b16524f095
Bug 1189927 - Content updates need to be made on the FxOS FAQ

https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/d9cff122f9c2e9c874ba90618e4da433ae6d53c2
Merge pull request #3211 from malena/bug-1189927-content-updates-FXOS-faq

Bug 1189927 - Content updates need to be made on the FxOS FAQ