1232389 - make push notifications sumo page more user friendly

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(support.mozilla.org :: Knowledge Base Content, task)

Description

[Edwin Wong [:edwong]]

Please make the sumo doc on push notifications more user friendly with screen shots. 

https://support.mozilla.org/en-US/kb/push-notifications-firefox?as=u&utm_source=inproduct#w_upgraded-notifications

Comment 1

[Edwin Wong [:edwong]]

Jeff, this came up with mayo and madhava when we started linking to it from the 'migration' notification.  Please provide guidance on any language changes also.

Comment 2

[Jeff Griffiths (:canuckistani) (:⚡︎)]

ni'ing Joni who writes this material.

Joni, what do you think about adding screenshots?

Comment 3

[Joni Chan]

Sure thing. I'll ask Tanvi if it's okay to make changes now. We used an approved draft that she provided. (bug 1220250)

Comment 4

[Tanvi Vyas[:tanvi]]

The sumo page is based off of https://docs.google.com/document/d/16-sqk6l_D22PFYXGaEN_8kwHrrhvvoOYx0h-OBIGF-I/edit#heading=h.449qzmjjc36s , which many folks contributed to.  I believe Bill Maggs was the owner, but he is no longer at Mozilla.

This section of the sumo page was my contribution and I'd like it to keep the language there: https://support.mozilla.org/en-US/kb/push-notifications-firefox#w_upgraded-notifications

I can't speak to the rest of the content.

Comment 5

[Edwin Wong [:edwong]]

:jsavage - the UI is final for Fx44, can you add screen shots.  Jeff can you offer any changes to the copy as an executive felt the language wasn't very positive.

Comment 6

[Jeff Griffiths (:canuckistani) (:⚡︎)]

Joni and I are meeting next week and will report back.

Comment 7

[Edwin Wong [:edwong]]

This is fixed and live.