Copy change on download confirmation page - /new/?scene=2

RESOLVED FIXED

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www.mozilla.org
Pages & Content
RESOLVED FIXED
2 years ago
2 years ago

People

(Reporter: erenaud, Assigned: agibson)

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Production

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Description

2 years ago
Anytime before, but no later than 1/24/2017:

Swap out the current headline: 

"Enjoy online freedom." 

with:
 
"The last independent browser." 

on the download confirmation page (/new/?scene=2)
https://www.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/new/?scene=2
(Assignee)

Updated

2 years ago
Assignee: nobody → agibson
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
(Assignee)

Comment 1

2 years ago
Created attachment 8826133 [details] [review]
GitHub pull request
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Comment 2

2 years ago
Hi Eric,

I've opened a pull request for this change above, but marked it as do-not-merge for now, before we start translating this new string. Are we sure we want to be as bold as to state we're the "last" independent browser. I'd say this is easily questionable at present and could also be over more so false in the future. It almost feels like we're making a statement or prediction for something that is yet to come?
Flags: needinfo?(erenaud)

Comment 3

2 years ago
Let me know if this is the message we want to go with. The deadline is approaching.

Comment 4

2 years ago
Alex, 

This is message has been approved for use. Thanks for checking.
Flags: needinfo?(erenaud)
(Assignee)

Comment 5

2 years ago
(In reply to Jennifer Balaco from comment #4)
> Alex, 
> 
> This is message has been approved for use. Thanks for checking.

Ok thanks, we'll proceed with translating the new string.

Comment 6

2 years ago
Thank you.  It has been exposed for localization.
(Assignee)

Comment 7

2 years ago
Fixed in https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/5b25dc7e567922dac1b9cb871c0d4c0358f1c669
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 2 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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