[Focus] [id] App Store screenshots: review localized version

RESOLVED FIXED

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RESOLVED FIXED
2 years ago
2 years ago

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(Reporter: delphine, Unassigned)

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Here is the link to the localized screenshots we were provided with: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3iNlthQXwbpX1BJRnVIeVFueWM

Note that English version of screenshots can be found on Bug 1326395 in the attachements.

There is no firm deadline as to when the review needs to be made as we have been told updates to localized versions can be done whenever requested - however since we are launching the app very soon, let's aim for the end of this week if that is possible.

Please close this bug as Fixed if all looks good to you.
Thank you!

Comment 1

2 years ago
(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #0)
> Here is the link to the localized screenshots we were provided with:
> https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3iNlthQXwbpX1BJRnVIeVFueWM
> 
> Note that English version of screenshots can be found on Bug 1326395 in the
> attachements.
> 
> There is no firm deadline as to when the review needs to be made as we have
> been told updates to localized versions can be done whenever requested -
> however since we are launching the app very soon, let's aim for the end of
> this week if that is possible.
> 
> Please close this bug as Fixed if all looks good to you.
> Thank you!

Hi Delphine,

We need to change this string: "Laman Web lebih cepat memuat dengan menyingkirkan pelacak"
into this: "Laman Web lebih cepat dimuat dengan menyingkirkan pelacak"

That's all. Everything is OK.

Thanks!
Thanks Fauzan! Please make that edit directly in Pontoon (https://pontoon.mozilla.org/id/appstores/focus_ios/screenshots_v2_1.lang).
You may close the bug here once all looks good, to let me know. Thanks!
Sorry, no need to close bug until you review the final version :) But please let me know once you've made the necessary changes in Pontoon so we can get updated screenshots for review.

Comment 4

2 years ago
(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #2)
> Thanks Fauzan! Please make that edit directly in Pontoon
> (https://pontoon.mozilla.org/id/appstores/focus_ios/screenshots_v2_1.lang).
> You may close the bug here once all looks good, to let me know. Thanks!

I've fixed it in Pontoon. Please check. Thanks!
Adding Tyron so he can help with updating the screenshots and resubmit here for review from you once that is done. THanks!
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Comment 6

2 years ago
Created attachment 8830403 [details]
iOS-Focus_iPad-Performance_ID.png
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Comment 7

2 years ago
Created attachment 8830404 [details]
iOS-Focus_iPhone-Performance_ID.png
Hey Fauzan: can you confirm if everything looks good now?
thanks!
Flags: needinfo?(moz)

Comment 9

2 years ago
(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #8)
> Hey Fauzan: can you confirm if everything looks good now?
> thanks!

Yes, everything looks great now!

Thanks a lot!
Flags: needinfo?(moz)
\o/
Thanks, closing bug then!
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 2 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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