1355184 - /private-browsing feature page in Fx content hub

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Eric Renaud [:erenaud]]

Demo - https://bedrock-demo-agibson.us-west.moz.works/en-US/firefox/features/private-browsing/

Comment 1

[Eric Renaud [:erenaud]]

Alex - copy is here, first draft, going into review - 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PwntEbcjqhSoSZb1x9YR86F4onZ3-oEbx8ANiiBxR4Q/edit?ts=58ebabaf

Comment 2

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

(In reply to Eric Renaud from comment #1)
> Alex - copy is here, first draft, going into review - 
> 
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PwntEbcjqhSoSZb1x9YR86F4onZ3-
> oEbx8ANiiBxR4Q/edit?ts=58ebabaf

This doesn't seem to be the copy doc - this reads just like general direction for copy (it doesn't use full sentences) and is what we looked at the day before yesterday. I'll use this for now if you think that's really worth spending the time on, but it seems very unlikely this is what we'll use.

Comment 3

[Fabio Rios [:frios]]

(In reply to Alex Gibson [:agibson] from comment #2)
> (In reply to Eric Renaud from comment #1)
> > Alex - copy is here, first draft, going into review - 
> > 
> > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PwntEbcjqhSoSZb1x9YR86F4onZ3-
> > oEbx8ANiiBxR4Q/edit?ts=58ebabaf
> 
> This doesn't seem to be the copy doc - this reads just like general
> direction for copy (it doesn't use full sentences) and is what we looked at
> the day before yesterday. I'll use this for now if you think that's really
> worth spending the time on, but it seems very unlikely this is what we'll
> use.

That was the brief, here's copy: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E5lj8MhNcU90-WEKHx23WCDWujhQrfsGR9gv3DzJNoo/edit

Comment 4

[Fabio Rios [:frios]]

(In reply to Fabio Rios [:frios] from comment #3)
> (In reply to Alex Gibson [:agibson] from comment #2)
> > (In reply to Eric Renaud from comment #1)
> > > Alex - copy is here, first draft, going into review - 
> > > 
> > > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PwntEbcjqhSoSZb1x9YR86F4onZ3-
> > > oEbx8ANiiBxR4Q/edit?ts=58ebabaf
> > 
> > This doesn't seem to be the copy doc - this reads just like general
> > direction for copy (it doesn't use full sentences) and is what we looked at
> > the day before yesterday. I'll use this for now if you think that's really
> > worth spending the time on, but it seems very unlikely this is what we'll
> > use.
> 
> That was the brief, here's copy:
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E5lj8MhNcU90-
> WEKHx23WCDWujhQrfsGR9gv3DzJNoo/edit

We are capturing all of the latest copy withing this doc. It includes all pages that are available. This copy will likely have a few minor edits, but I'd love for us to be able to preview within the web pages now so we can confirm length, size, or any missing pieces.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VDTYwHUcRrC9pujXUsjB6lKN-G-h-03_yz1-_mmODbk/edit#

Comment 5

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Great, thanks!

Comment 6

[christa seabolt]

Attachment: ffx_hub_feature-hero_private.jpg

private hero

Comment 7

[christa seabolt]

Headline and subhead lowercase		
	
Download Firefox CTA: font should be in bold and needs the arrows on the left. The over state should be 100% color and the type and arrow go to white. 	
			
Firefox Privacy: All hyper links #9C432A and no underline	
			
The headlines in 'fresh from our blog' - make the hover text: #9C432A
				
Only expose more speed and more freedom (hide private) You already did this in the AM

Comment 8

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

(In reply to christa seabolt from comment #7)
> Headline and subhead lowercase		
> 	
> Download Firefox CTA: font should be in bold and needs the arrows on the
> left. The over state should be 100% color and the type and arrow go to
> white. 	
> 			
> Firefox Privacy: All hyper links #9C432A and no underline	
> 			
> The headlines in 'fresh from our blog' - make the hover text: #9C432A
> 				
> Only expose more speed and more freedom (hide private) You already did this
> in the AM

These fixes should now all be done, thanks.

Comment 9

[christa seabolt]

Attachment: private_feature_baggage.jpg

no baggage image

Comment 10

[christa seabolt]

Attachment: private_feature_notrace.jpg

no trace image

Comment 11

[christa seabolt]

Attachment: private_feature_zeroChill.jpg

Comment 12

[christa seabolt]

Modern and independent images are wrong. modern/fast is the red one with diagonal stripes and independent is the purple graphic with triangles.

Comment 13

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

(In reply to christa seabolt from comment #12)
> Modern and independent images are wrong. modern/fast is the red one with
> diagonal stripes and independent is the purple graphic with triangles.

Fixed, thanks. New images also added.

Comment 14

[pgerman]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Hi6TO2687Vtt92FnoiBuLkNF1KgJmI5JjUkk58NqC2o/edit#heading=h.s8ueulf2e7mz 

GA Reqs here in this doc. Please Ping when its ready for validation.

Comment 15

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

(In reply to pgerman from comment #14)
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/
> 1Hi6TO2687Vtt92FnoiBuLkNF1KgJmI5JjUkk58NqC2o/edit#heading=h.s8ueulf2e7mz 
> 
> GA Reqs here in this doc. Please Ping when its ready for validation.

Ready for validation

Comment 16

[pgerman]

Please append the following query parameters to the destination URL of any cards leaving the domain 
?utm_source=www.mozilla.org&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=fx-content-hub

Please treat this as nice to have for launch.

Comment 17

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

(In reply to pgerman from comment #16)
> Please append the following query parameters to the destination URL of any
> cards leaving the domain 
> ?utm_source=www.mozilla.org&utm_medium=referral&utm_campaign=fx-content-hub
> 
> Please treat this as nice to have for launch.

Done thanks

Comment 18

[pgerman]

Hi Alex,

Can you change the data-link-position link in the 'fresh from the blog' section to match the below?

data-link-name=’<Article headline>’
data-link-type=’link’
data-link-position=’Fresh from the blog’

Comment 19

[Eric Renaud [:erenaud]]

Alex - please see the v1 must haves in the final (final?) review doc for this page

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PVJ2WdB3qzvsn6vJAPGZvcyBlOeZU42MONFqRP49KkA/edit

Comment 20

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Fixed in https://github.com/mozilla/bedrock/commit/024ee2ac12385a4f9281be402f02341513ad7a20