[Focus Android] [Screenshots & Feature Graphics] Sign-off for "de" locale

RESOLVED FIXED

Status

Mozilla Localizations
de / German
RESOLVED FIXED
a year ago
a year ago

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(Reporter: delphine, Unassigned)

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(Not tracked)

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Hi Coce and Aryx! Hope you are both doing well.

Here are some screenshots and Feature Graphics work that will require some l10n testing. They will be used in the Play Store for Focus for Android, which is going to launch it's v1 very soon :)

Here are the details provided by Mike: 
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Please review the feature graphic and screenshots for the Google Play store for the upcoming launch of Firefox Focus.

Note that the last screenshot is different than the english version and may be modified by either removing "the privacy browser" or ensuring the copy is in one line.  Either way, please verify the last screenshot for copy.

Screenshots:https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EX2dMaDNKaVo3Wjg

feature graphics: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EZmxMMmd2eTVmVTQ

Deadline: June 12, 2017.

Thank you!
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You can close this bug as resolved-fixed to signal us your sign-off. Otherwise, let's work together in this bug to fix anything that may be needed.

Thanks a bunch!
Thanks Delphine. What I noticed: 

Screenshots:

Rightmost section: Capitalization is needed. „Der Browser mit Privatsphäre“ is the correct way to write it.



Feature graphic:

I think it should say „Firefox Klar“ instead of „Firefox Focus“. The comment above also applies.
Correct, good catch! I'll ask to have those updated :) 
Thanks Michael!
Fourth image from the left: Text is not properly centered (e.g. look at "Einer" and "Marke").
Updated copies for screenshots and feature graphic: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BxiQvPDzee3EbXFLWU1GWHZINm8

Please let us know if it's better now! thanks
Flags: needinfo?(coce)
Flags: needinfo?(aryx.bugmail)
This looks good to me.
Flags: needinfo?(aryx.bugmail)
Likewise. Thanks.
Flags: needinfo?(coce)
Thank you! Thus, closing :) Have a good weekend!
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: a year ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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