1371087 - [Focus Android] [Screenshots & Feature Graphics] Sign-off for "it" locale

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: it / Italian, enhancement)

Description

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - OOO]]

I'd like to pass on some screenshots and Feature Graphics work that will require some l10n testing. They will be used in the Play Store for Focus for Android, which is going to launch it's v1 very soon :)

Here are the details provided by Mike: 
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Please review the feature graphic and screenshots for the Google Play store for the upcoming launch of Firefox Focus.

Note that the last screenshot is different than the english version and may be modified by either removing "the privacy browser" or ensuring the copy is in one line.  Either way, please verify the last screenshot for copy.

Screenshots:https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EX2dMaDNKaVo3Wjg

feature graphics: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EZmxMMmd2eTVmVTQ

Deadline: June 12, 2017.

Thank you!
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You can close this bug as resolved-fixed to signal us your sign-off. Otherwise, let's work together in this bug to fix anything that may be needed.

Thanks a bunch!

Comment 1

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

1st screen, 4th line of text
Is it just me or there's a double space between "elementi traccianti"?

> Note that the last screenshot is different than the english version 
> and may be modified by either removing "the privacy browser" or 
> ensuring the copy is in one line.  Either way, please verify the 
> last screenshot for copy.

I'm not sure I get this part. 

The "feature graphic" shows "il browser per la privacy" on one line, and that's good. That doesn't happen in the 4th panel of the screenshot.

@delphine
Are we supposed to provide an alternative copy that fits on one line?

Comment 2

[Sara Todaro]

Screenshots:

>1st screen, 4th line of text
>Is it just me or there's a double space between "elementi traccianti"?

Looks like a double space to me, not too sure though.

Also, last screen, dubbed "Small download". The spelling is fine, but I would recommend to split the sentence as follows:
>Il browser
>per la privacy

(If you are going to put it on the same line though, this becomes irrelevant.)

Also not sure If we have to provide a translation for "Small download" in the [en] screenshot.
If that's the case, I suggest:
> Small download > Download rapido
>Only 4 MB > Solo 4 MB

Feature graphics:
Everything looks OK to me.

Comment 3

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to Sara Todaro from comment #2)
> Also not sure If we have to provide a translation for "Small download" in
> the [en] screenshot.

No, that goes only to some markets.

Comment 4

[[e-mail]]

For "the privacy browser" content on the last screenshot, that will be updated to show up on one line as it does on the feature graphic, so no alternative copy needed.  Thanks!

Comment 5

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Thanks Delphine. 

@Sandro
Any further comment on the images?

Comment 6

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to Francesco Lodolo [:flod] from comment #5)
> Thanks Delphine. 

D'oh, I didn't check who replied. Thanks Mike :-)

Comment 7

[Sandro Della Giustina]

No, I have nothing to add.

Comment 8

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

OK, I think the only problem to fix is the double space, and put the sentence on one line in the last slide.

Comment 9

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Any update?

Comment 10

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Never mind, found them
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0BxiQvPDzee3EaWY2M29nRHRmV2M