1371088 - [Focus Android] [Screenshots & Feature Graphics] Sign-off for "ja" locale

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: ja / Japanese, enhancement)

Description

[Delphine Lebédel]

I'd like to pass on some screenshots and Feature Graphics work that will require some l10n testing. They will be used in the Play Store for Focus for Android, which is going to launch it's v1 very soon :)

Here are the details provided by Mike: 
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Please review the feature graphic and screenshots for the Google Play store for the upcoming launch of Firefox Focus.

Note that the last screenshot is different than the english version and may be modified by either removing "the privacy browser" or ensuring the copy is in one line.  Either way, please verify the last screenshot for copy.

Screenshots:https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EX2dMaDNKaVo3Wjg

feature graphics: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EZmxMMmd2eTVmVTQ

Deadline: June 12, 2017.

Thank you!
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You can close this bug as resolved-fixed to signal us your sign-off. Otherwise, let's work together in this bug to fix anything that may be needed.

Thanks a bunch!

Comment 1

[ghoti.fish.dsk]

Attachment: Android-Focus_Pixel_JA.png

(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #0)
> Screenshots:https://drive.google.com/open?id=0BxiQvPDzee3EX2dMaDNKaVo3Wjg

Some line break change requests (if possible):

1.
current: "広告その他のト<br>ラッキングを"
request: "広告その他の<br>トラッキングを"

2.
current: "より高速にブラ<br>ウジング"
request: "より高速に<br>ブラウジング"

Comment 2

[Delphine Lebédel]

Thanks a bunch! sent this feedback on over to marketing/designer and they will fix this.

Comment 3

[Delphine Lebédel]

One thing: marketing took as a reference the strings from Focus for iOS screenshots, in order to produce these. Can you make sure that the line breaks are indeed in the right area on Pontoon? I admit I tried looking and it's really hard for me to understand if it's currently fixed or not :D (my brain is really not used to Japanese reading ^^) Thanks!

Comment 4

[ghoti.fish.dsk]

They might be soft(implicit) line breaks. There are no <br> codes at the point for iOS.
And the screenshot for iOS is like this:
https://itunes.apple.com/jp/app/id1055677337?mt=8

Comment 5

[Delphine Lebédel]

Marketing uses the strings from Pootle, not from past screenshots for iOS. So if it's not updated on Pootle side, we'll need to make the same correction again possibly in the future.
I've seen line breaks used for iOS in Pontoon: https://pontoon.mozilla.org/ja/appstores/focus_ios/screenshots_v2_1.lang/?string=160942
I think you can just insert some more so it reflects it on the screenshot once we import de strings

Comment 6

[Delphine Lebédel]

And when I say Pootle I mean Pontoon (ugh)

Comment 7

[ghoti.fish.dsk]

Thanks for your advice but I'm just going over.
I'm afraid changing strings on Pontoon will make unexpected changes for iOS screenshots (in the future) and my request is not critical.
So just make resolved-fixed.

Comment 8

[Delphine Lebédel]

Thanks for the feedback.
I think some changes were made in the meantime, can you please let us know if it's ok now? thanks!

https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/0BxiQvPDzee3EbXFLWU1GWHZINm8

Comment 9

[ghoti.fish.dsk]

(In reply to Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - use Need Info] from comment #8)
> Thanks for the feedback.
> I think some changes were made in the meantime, can you please let us know
> if it's ok now? thanks!
> 
> https://drive.google.com/drive/u/1/folders/0BxiQvPDzee3EbXFLWU1GWHZINm8

It looks nice! It's okay. Thanks.

Comment 10

[Delphine Lebédel]

Thanks for the review! Closing then :)