1387348 - [cs] Review all documents in mozilla/legal-docs repository

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: cs / Czech, enhancement)

Description

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Given the amount of mistakes and terminology disobeying we should go through all relevant documents (Firefox OS and Marketplace stuff can be probably skipped) and do a detailed review. Some mistakes were also in the text itself (see https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/pull/878 and https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/pull/879), so we should check everything with the original too.

To prevent such issues to repeat, we can create a list of issues we discover (incl. those from the past - see all my commits in this repository) and use them as a starting point, what should be covered in a style guide.

Comment 1

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Per discussion with Peiying, we can start reviewing the documents. But we have to keep in mind, some of them are obsolete (firefox OS, Marketplace, ...) and some of them might be rewritten soon.

Comment 2

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

You probably notice that not all legal docs have been localized in cs - the locale lists vary a lot from doc to doc. 

I would direct your attention to these documents:
- Fx cloud services ToS (just updated)
- Fx cloud services PN 
- Fx PN (rewritten)
- Mozilla PN (this is two years old, if you have not reviewed before)
- Websites PN (just updated)

Any feedback is welcome.

Comment 3

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Thank you :CocoMo. I will start with this list now and file PRs where I find any issues.

Comment 4

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

I have spent ~2 hours to got only through the first three documents. I will link the PRs here, just to make them discoverable for future reference to include the mistakes in the style guide. The other docs will follow later.

Comment 5

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: GitHub PRs

Comment 6

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_ToS/cs.md

Comment 7

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_PrivacyNotice/cs.md

Comment 8

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_ToS/cs.md

Comment 9

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: marketplace_terms_of_use/cs.md

Comment 10

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: marketplace_developer_agreement/cs.md

Comment 11

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 12

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_os_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 13

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_ToS/cs.md

Comment 14

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_PrivacyNotice/cs.md

Comment 15

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 16

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: WebRTC_ToS/cs.md

Comment 17

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 18

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 19

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_PrivacyNotice/cs.md

Comment 20

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_PrivacyNotice/cs.md

Comment 21

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_cloud_services_ToS/cs.md

Comment 22

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: firefox_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 23

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: acceptable_use_policy/cs.md

Only three live documents (after dropping obsolete ones like Firefox OS, Marketplace or Hello) are to be reviewed now.
- https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/tree/master/mozilla_privacy_policy
- https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/tree/master/websites_privacy_notice
- https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/tree/master/Websites_ToU

Comment 24

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: mozilla_privacy_policy/cs.md

Comment 25

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: Websites_ToU/cs.md

Comment 26

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

Attachment: websites_privacy_notice/cs.md

Comment 27

[Michal Stanke (Mozilla.cz) [:mstanke][:MikkCZ]]

I have updated the last document. Now the pull requests are pending peer review from the team.