1411327 - Firefox v10.0 for iOS Screenshot update approval (For Quantum/Photon launch)

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: Other, enhancement)

Description

[[e-mail]]

Hi,

Can you please approve the App Store screenshots for iOS?

Note:  Copy has not changed from what we have in the current app store.  We have only updated the in-phone screenshot to reflect the new photon design.  Not all in-phone screenshots are fully localized.  We are only looking for must have changes or glaring mistakes like any cultural or political sensitivies.  

Locales required: 
French
Italian
German
Spanish (sp)
Chinese-Traditional
Chinese - Simplified
Japanese
Brazilian Port.
Indonesian
Russian

Deadline:  Nov 1, 2017

Link:  https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B4vOYc4rq2YASDdxanpWV1ByYTQ

Comment 1

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

@Mike: there are a number of screenshots here were there are major issues that need to be fixed. I think you should be aware of them now so you have time to fix this.
For reference, take a look at these attached bugs: 
* Bug 1411451
* Bug 1411441
* Bug 1411442
* Bug 1411449 

In many cases, the texts don't come from our translations and are wrong. Please check individual bugs for further details.

Comment 2

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

@Mike: here's the feedback for Indonesian locale (id). Fixes are needed there. I've also added the comment about process because going forwards, I think this will be the most painless way to go. We're going back and forth to fix a lot of things now because we weren't part of this process. Let's avoid this next time, it'll save everyone time and effort. thanks!
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Feedback "id":
- search.png: mistranslation, the translation for "and" (dan) is in the wrong place. Should be: "Pencarian nan cepat dan cerdas": https://pontoon.mozilla.org/id/appstores/fx_ios/screenshots_v3.lang/?string=160938
- sync.png: we never use "histori" for "history", we also use serial comma, the current screenshot missing one before "dan". Should be: "Akses tab, markah, dan riwayat dari perangkat lainnya" https://pontoon.mozilla.org/id/appstores/fx_ios/screenshots_v3.lang/?string=160826

Comment on the screenshot itself: Could the marketing generate proper screenshots rather than changing the text only via PSDs? I mean, the ones with proper iOS locale setup (current ones have wrong clock, wrong keyboard). These should go live in iOS App Store, no? Can we expect another degree of "correctness"?
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Comment 3

[[e-mail]]

Hi Delphine,

Its a very very manual process for our designers to put together these screenshots given that the app is still in beta, and we dont have automatic tools to get the most accurate content. 

The actual marketing copy has not changed from when it was previously approved by the l10n team, but ill request for these changes.

Thanks for the feedback.

Comment 4

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

(In reply to [e-mail] from comment #3)
> Hi Delphine,
> 
> Its a very very manual process for our designers to put together these
> screenshots given that the app is still in beta, and we dont have automatic
> tools to get the most accurate content. 
> 
> The actual marketing copy has not changed from when it was previously
> approved by the l10n team, but ill request for these changes.
> 
The screenshots and text for Indonesian are in English on the appstore: https://itunes.apple.com/id/app/firefox-web-browser/id989804926?mt=8
(vs French for example: https://itunes.apple.com/fr/app/firefox-web-browser/id989804926?mt=8)
I fail to find the actual bug that we had worked on at the time.

Comment 5

[[e-mail]]

hmm.. thats weird.. I dont remember why they are in english.  Regardless, we will make these changes and reflect localized screenshots for ID.  Its a big market for us!

Comment 6

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Mike: today's the deadline for this but I see quite a few bugs still open. Let me ping people and give more details on what's going on

Comment 7

[Delphine Lebédel [:delphine - Use needinfo]]

Ok Mike, I confirm the only other change was for Japanese (and you saw that, I just read your comment)

Comment 8

[[e-mail]]

great.  thanks!