1413588 - [Engagement][Firefox Rocket][id]: launch email

Status: RESOLVED DUPLICATE of bug 1410029

(Mozilla Localizations :: id / Indonesian, defect)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hello team,

Relay message from Eddie:

Source: 
https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1eYMQvQELz-9SoFhL25y6z8q7QE3adD4VE0vb5-BEtVs/edit?usp=sharing (I made a copy of Eddie's so I can give you access)

Deadline: Nov 3 or 5 (at the latest; email team needs to set it up)
Launch: Nov 7

Please indicate when the copy is ready for the email team if you get it done sooner. 

Thank you,
Peiying

Comment 1

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

I want to add, there is a "signoff" step before the email launch. The email team will create a mockup for your approval after the email is localized.

Comment 2

[elin]

Attachment: Firefox Rocket Launch Email Design.png

Hi Benny,


I've uploaded the email design mockup in attachment,
does it looks good to you?

Comment 3

[Benny Chandra]

(In reply to elin from comment #2)
> Created attachment 8924997 [details]
> Firefox Rocket Launch Email Design.png
> 
> Hi Benny,
> 
> 
> I've uploaded the email design mockup in attachment,
> does it looks good to you?

Hi Eddie,

The header design looks great!
But, if possible, please consider to have an alternative header design with the rocket's direction turn to right. It''s not just about the balance, but I think it also will help "Firefox Rocket" become the real center of attention, not the rocket.


Btw, the current Indonesian copy is still not final. I'll finalized it soon in the next few hours. I'll let you know when it's ready.

Comment 4

[Benny Chandra]

Hi Peiying and Eddie,

The Indonesian copy is ready. I just finalized the content.

Thanks to the ID localizers team!

Comment 5

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

@Kirby, check the email I sent. Can your team help create the mockup so the community can review it over the weekend?

The email needs to go out on Monday evening Pacific time.

If this is not covered by your team, I will let Eddie handles it when he is online.

Comment 6

[elin]

Attachment: Revised_Firefox Rocket Beta Launch Email Design.png

Hi Benny,


Thank you for the great support and feedback.

For the header image, we think your advice is good.
But since we are mobile-focused in this launch,
the effect on the element position should be diluted.
(Also if we quickly scan the header image from top to bottom, 
 we'll see logo -> rocket wings -> rocket fire)

Please take a look at the mockup file with updated copy,
and let me know if any questions.


Thank you!

Comment 7

[Benny Chandra]

(In reply to elin from comment #6)
> Created attachment 8925468 [details]
> Revised_Firefox Rocket Beta Launch Email Design.png
> 
> Hi Benny,
> 
> 
> Thank you for the great support and feedback.
> 
> For the header image, we think your advice is good.
> But since we are mobile-focused in this launch,
> the effect on the element position should be diluted.
> (Also if we quickly scan the header image from top to bottom, 
>  we'll see logo -> rocket wings -> rocket fire)
> 
> Please take a look at the mockup file with updated copy,
> and let me know if any questions.
> 
> 
> Thank you!

Hi Eddie,
Overall there's no problem with the copy, you only forgot to change the headline with the updated one.

Comment 8

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

@Elin, Has this been fixed? Was it launched? If all has been resolved, we can close the bug.

Comment 9

[elin]

Hi Peiying, 


Yes this has been resolved,
the email has launched as discussed in this bug:
https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1410029


Thank you!