1413805 - [mozilla.org][zh-CN] letter from the CEO - need review

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: zh-CN / Chinese (Simplified), enhancement)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hello,

We need your help to check the localized content. Make any necessary changes directly in the file:

https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1tmiWrSN_XcYT613HISePaqEw8qkDOKTFlgv6Pl4K-2c/edit?usp=sharing.

Deadline: Nov 3 or sooner

The next step after this is staging the content on the web. We will conduct a 2nd round of review.

Comment 1

[YF (Yang)]

I made some changes. An important correction is that I think the speed increase is x2 instead of + x2.

The current translation is "全新的" (Similar to full-new) & "崭新的" (Similar to polishing-new) used for "the new", I'm not sure that's good or unity is better.

Comment 2

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thanks YF for your comment. And you raised a good point on the translation in Chinese. I agree with you. twice as is not the same as two times more. (twice as fast means doubling the performance)

@Peyton, you have access to the file so please review the changes and see if you are ok.

Once you are ok with the copy, we will move to the staging of the content. At this point, it is time consuming to make corrections as it is manual.  Let's get it right the first time.

Comment 3

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

@Craig, the content is ready for staging.

Comment 4

[Craig Cook (:craigcook)]

Attachment: quantum-whatsnew-zh-CN.png

There's some bug in my code that is preventing the page from displaying on the demo server, though all the tests run and it works locally. I'm sure we can get it fixed on Monday and the URL will be https://bedrock-demo-craigcook.us-west.moz.works/zh-CN/firefox/57.0/whatsnew/

Meanwhile I'll attach a screenshot for initial review until the demo server is working properly.

Comment 5

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

@YF, pls take a look of the screenshot to confirm.

Comment 6

[YF (Yang)]

LGTM.