1482353 - [Legal]: Firefox Reality: About Your Rights & PN set up doc in GH

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: Other, enhancement)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Source: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k2vlttR0NFrlC3ngOq1EN2qhctBXafT2z8i_CEQtykM/edit

Output: https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/firefox_reality_your_rights/en-US.md

Comment 1

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Michael, let me know if it looks ok. I gave the doc this name: firefox_reality_your_rights/en-US.md. If this is not what you had in mind, please suggest a different one. And lastly, do we know if this will be localized in any languages.

And of course, we need the Firefox Reality PN created too.

Comment 2

[Michael Feldman (use NI)]

There is a statement in brackets in the second heading: "[Toggle by “service terms” above]"

This text shouldn't appear in the doc. Instead, that section should dissapear until a user clicks "service terms" in the text immediately above. Then, when the user clicks that link, the text below the "Firefox Reality Web-Based Information Services" appears. 

This is the same functionality as the "about:rights" page in the browser

Comment 3

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

I will fix this if I know the proper code is for the link.

When I look up the file you refer to: about:rights#webservices, this file in GitHub is the source https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/firefox_about_rights/en-US.md, but they don't quite match. Notice there are two bold paragraphs on the web, when there is one in the source. Additionally "service terms" has no link.

Comment 4

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

I fixed the folder name so the naming convention is consistent with same doc type: https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/firefox_reality_about_rights/en-US.md

Comment 5

[Michael Feldman (use NI)]

The "service terms" should have a link. I just didn't include one in the original Google Doc because I didn't have a way of creating that toggle link. 

And it is correct that there is only one paragraph in the source. It's somewhat different from the web version, which applies to other Fx products. 

Any other questions?

Comment 6

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Since this doc is depending on the Firefox Reality PN, which is not ready, let's wait until all the docs are in place, then we can figure out what the link of "service terms" should be.

Comment 7

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

*Privacy Notice*
- Source: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RptXsv1s3TWVQNPKoqhrdjfmncv3-jyWztDM2U_I1Hg/edit#heading=h.c7djepwydfyo
- Output: https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/firefox_reality_privacy_notice/en-US.md

@Michael, please check my comments in the doc and review the file in GitHub. Let me know if you want to make any additional edit.

Comment 8

[Michael Feldman (use NI)]

I updated the Google doc. The Github looks fine other than the changes to the Google Doc I proposed.

Comment 9

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

@Michael, 

1). Privacy Notice: your comments were implemented. 
2). About Rights: this document is still missing the link info to allow it to toggle. I need it before the doc can be published unless you have changed your mind.

Comment 10

[Michael Feldman (use NI)]

Hi Peiying, 

We have a meeting to iron out all remaining issues in these docs. I've just added you to it. Let me know if you can't make it and we'll sync up separately.

Comment 11

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Michael, to summarize the latest communications and actions: 

- Privacy Notice was revised and updated according to the latest. Doc in GH repo is ready for production push.
- About Rights: Still waiting for update on the toggle link, mentioned in comment #5?

Comment 12

[Michael Feldman (use NI)]

If we can create a toggle link like the one in the usual about:rights page in the browser, that'd be great. If not, let's just not worry about the toggling, and include all the text on the page. 

With that, we can push to go live on Sept 18.

Comment 13

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

As mentioned earlier in comment #3, what's on the web doesn't match what's in the repo, so I can't figure out the link.

Since this doc has been left idle for sometime, double check one more time before I file a bug for both docs to request production push:

- Source: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1k2vlttR0NFrlC3ngOq1EN2qhctBXafT2z8i_CEQtykM/edit
- GitHub: https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/firefox_reality_about_rights/en-US.md - I changed the verbiage to "can be found in the service terms (below)." Let me know if this is acceptable workaround.

Confirm in this bug so we can wrap this up. Thanks!

Comment 14

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

> - Source:
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/
> 1k2vlttR0NFrlC3ngOq1EN2qhctBXafT2z8i_CEQtykM/edit
> - GitHub:
> https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/
> firefox_reality_about_rights/en-US.md - I changed the verbiage to "can be
> found in the service terms (below)." Let me know if this is acceptable
> workaround.

Correction: the link should be https://github.com/mozilla/legal-docs/blob/master/firefox_reality_about_rights/en-US.md (the above link was my reference to change the wording to it is now).

Comment 15

[Michael Feldman (use NI)]

That's an acceptable workaround. Thanks.