Firstly, the live bookmarks page didn't validate because of a double-instance of #mBody. A few changes to make the page in line with the Documentation Style Guide: some inline styles have been converted to valid HTML (image heights and widths). All of the double-spacing has been removed. Finally a few grammatical errors fixed and some more readable terminology.
A couple comments: - Please wrap the text to 80 characters or thereabouts, not 160 or whatever it is right now. - Take out the paragraph with the 'clear' on it and put the 'clear' on the heading right below it. If you'd like to rewrite parts of it to improve the text, please do. I'm not really impressed with the document as it stands. To make it a bit easier on you, you might want to - - save the page source to a file on your disk and note the date+time - apply your own patch to the file with the 'patch' tool - edit the document further - if nothing has changed (check the changelog) between the time you pulled the source and the time you've finished editing the document, paste the new text into Doctor and ask for a new diff. Otherwise, just attach the whole document and tell me the date+time you got the source; I can diff against the old version. If you've got questions about any of this, feel free to ask me.
Assignee: mozilla.webmaster → ross
Status: UNCONFIRMED → NEW
Ever confirmed: true
Created attachment 158188 [details] [diff] [review] patch #1 Stealing the bug... This patch addresses all the minor things, not the text itself. I removed the word Atom from the patch for the moment, since Atom is absolutely no form of RSS. The page shouldn't really talk about RSS I guess, it should be mentioned, but the words syndication and feeds are much more appropriate.
Assignee: ross → bug
Attachment #157909 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
This has been fixed by checkins from other patches. If I missed something please reopen and I shall address the remaining issues.
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 14 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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