297577 - Update search sentence in welcome.xhtml

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(SeaMonkey :: Help Viewer, defect)

Description

[Stefan [:stefanh]]

Since there's no search button anymore, the text should be changed a bit...

Comment 1

[Stefan [:stefanh]]

Attachment: simple one-liner

Comment 2

[Jeff Walden (gone starting June 8)]

Comment on attachment 186132 [details] [diff] [review]
simple one-liner

Nice catch on this; I know I've read this more than a few times since then and
hadn't noticed anything wrong.

>   <li><strong>Search</strong> lets you search the Help files.<br/>
>-    Type a word or phrase and press Enter to see related topics. Then click
>+    Type a word or phrase in order to see related topics. Then click
>     the topic you want to read about.  If your search doesn't return any

You don't need to include "in order" in your correction; the words are just
extra baggage preventing the sentence from being understood.  With that change
made, r=me.

I'll check the patch in with the change when it gets a+.

Comment 3

[Stefan [:stefanh]]

Attachment: New version

Here's a new version without "in order".

Comment 4

[Jeff Walden (gone starting June 8)]

Patch checked in (with whitespace corrections so lines are as close to 80
characters as possible).  Marking FIXED...