299740 - Changes to update wizard text "For more information ... Click Here" for clarity, grammar, proper capitalization

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Toolkit :: Application Update, defect)

Description

[Mike Beltzner [:beltzner, not reading bugmail]]

When the update service finds an update, the following hyperlink is shown:

"For more general information about this update, Click Here"

 - "Click Here" shouldn't be capitalized
 - I think to be gramatically on the ball, we'd want that the structure to be
"Click here for ...", but I leave that call to dria :)
 - "more general information" could be interperted either as 
      1) "more general" information or 
      2) more "general information"

Suggest changing it to:

"Click here for more information about this update"

Comment 1

[Deb Richardson [:dria] (plz NEEDINFO)]

Getting rid of the "Click here" part entirely would be nice.  How about
something along the lines of a whole-sentence hyperlink reading, "View more
information about this update"?

Comment 2

[Mike Beltzner [:beltzner, not reading bugmail]]

Attachment: Screenshot of Software Update Available window from 20050705 build

Here's a screenshot of the current UI. The entire thing is a link right now,
now just the "click here". I like the idea of getting rid of "click here" in
its entirety, and making the hyperlink an action phrase.

View more..? See more...? either works for me

Comment 3

[Ben Goodger (use ben at mozilla dot org for email)]

Needs to be in beta for l10n

Comment 4

[Ben Goodger (use ben at mozilla dot org for email)]

Attachment: patch, changes to "View more information about this update"

Comment 5

[Ben Goodger (use ben at mozilla dot org for email)]

Landed deb's text.