315262 - "Old nightly" messages on Start page and home page need a comma (and should be the same?)

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Camino Graveyard :: Product Site, defect)

Description

[Smokey Ardisson (offline for a while; not following bugs - do not email)]

The message that gets served to users running old nightlies has a wierd sentence in it on the Start page, and that sentence needs a comma between its two independent clauses:

"Please download the latest nightly before reporting bugs, etc. or download our latest stable release, Camino 0.8.4."

It needs a comma after the period in etc. (because "or download our latest stable..." is another independent clause).

I actually like the phrasing of the "old nightly" message on the homepage better (any reason they're not in sync?), but it needs a comma, too (in another location):

"If you find the nightly version unstable you may be happier using our latest stable release, Camino 0.8.4 (or the multilingual version)."

A comma is needed after "unstable" because the first part of the sentence is an introductory clause.

</end grammar nit-picking>

Comment 1

[Wevah (Nate Weaver)]

Taking.

Comment 2

[Wevah (Nate Weaver)]

Should be fixed now. I added the comma, and synced the two strings (using the version from the homepage).