"Old nightly" messages on Start page and home page need a comma (and should be the same?)

VERIFIED FIXED

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trivial
VERIFIED FIXED
13 years ago
13 years ago

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(Reporter: alqahira, Assigned: moz)

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The message that gets served to users running old nightlies has a wierd sentence in it on the Start page, and that sentence needs a comma between its two independent clauses:

"Please download the latest nightly before reporting bugs, etc. or download our latest stable release, Camino 0.8.4."

It needs a comma after the period in etc. (because "or download our latest stable..." is another independent clause).

I actually like the phrasing of the "old nightly" message on the homepage better (any reason they're not in sync?), but it needs a comma, too (in another location):

"If you find the nightly version unstable you may be happier using our latest stable release, Camino 0.8.4 (or the multilingual version)."

A comma is needed after "unstable" because the first part of the sentence is an introductory clause.

</end grammar nit-picking>
(Assignee)

Comment 1

13 years ago
Taking.
Assignee: bugzilla → mozilla
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Comment 2

13 years ago
Should be fixed now. I added the comma, and synced the two strings (using the version from the homepage).
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 13 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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