479464 - Please QA the revised Other/Linux download.html page (for 3.5)

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect)

Description

[John Slater]

Last one of these...thanks!

Comment 1

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

[1] Page has 3 validation errors
[2] Please punctuate "What is Mozilla" with a "?"
[3] The link to "Visit Firefox Support" should just be http://support.mozilla.com/, rather than "http://support.mozilla.com/en-US/kb/"
[4] There's a typo: "intermedia" should be "intermediate"
[5] John might disagree, but I think "public benefit organization" should be punctuated because it's a compound modifier, so: "public-benefit organization".

Comment 2

[John Slater]

(In reply to comment #1)
> [5] John might disagree, but I think "public benefit organization" should be
> punctuated because it's a compound modifier, so: "public-benefit organization".
I agree with all points but this one...I think it's ok as is (no hyphen), and a quick Google search seems to back me up. 

Thanks for checking this stuff so carefully though!

Comment 3

[Alix Franquet [:alix]]

on [3] I was hoping the link could go to SUMO's install instructions directly, since we don't provide any on the page
http://support.mozilla.com/en-US/kb/Installing+Firefox

John: is that ok with you?

Comment 4

[John Slater]

(In reply to comment #3)
> John: is that ok with you?
Sure...think we should update the copy to make it more clear where you're going?

Comment 5

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

Issues 1, 2 and 4 are fixed in trunk in r22501.

I'll wait to change the SUMO link for a suggestion for wording the link.

Comment 6

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

[6] Can we line up the "Visit Firefox Support" link with the "Learn Some New Secrets" and the "What is Mozilla?" links?

Comment 7

[Steven Garrity [:sgarrity]]

Issue [7] fixed in trunk in r22513.

Comment 8

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Wil: any idea why trunk isn't showing any of Steven's changes?

Comment 9

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

(In reply to comment #8)
> Wil: any idea why trunk isn't showing any of Steven's changes?

nvm, it is now.

I don't see any remaining issues.

-> Fixed.

Comment 10

[Carsten Book [:Tomcat]]

verified !