482192 - Website: Subheading text for uploading personas, step 1, is grammatically incorrect

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Mozilla Labs Graveyard :: Personas Plus, defect, P1)

Description

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

(I know the mock has this incorrect, but we should still fix it.)

re: the subheading on https://sm-weave-proxy01.services.mozilla.com/store/upload_persona_step1_tmpl.html

The text "It’s easy to create your own Persona just follow the easy steps below!" is unwieldy; it should read either:

1) "It's easy to create your own Persona; just follow the easy steps below!"

-or-

2) "It's easy to create your own Persona, just follow the easy steps below!"

(Listed in order of preference.)

Comment 1

[Ryan Doherty (:rdoherty)]

Rolo, got a preference for adjusted wording?

Comment 2

[David Rolnitzky]

Let's go with "Follow the easy steps below to start dressing up your browser!"

Comment 3

[Suneel]

ryan, please confirm that you have the new copy so I can resolve this.

Comment 4

[Ryan Doherty (:rdoherty)]

(In reply to comment #3)
> ryan, please confirm that you have the new copy so I can resolve this.

I have the new copy, will change and I will resolve the bug when it's fixed.

Comment 5

[Ryan Doherty (:rdoherty)]

Done, also updated TOS template;
https://sm-weave-proxy01.services.mozilla.com/redesign/tos_tmpl.html

Comment 6

[Toby Elliott [:telliott]]

Believe this is ready for QA

Comment 7

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Verified FIXED on:

https://sm-weave-proxy01.services.mozilla.com/redesign/tos_tmpl.html
https://sm-weave-proxy01.services.mozilla.com/redesign/upload_persona_step1_tmpl.html