495265 - Registration Page - text changes

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Websites Graveyard :: mozillaservice.org, defect)

Description

[Jane Finette]

Header:
Old Copy: Create an account and tell us your story. You may also return to update your story.
New Copy: Create an account and tell us your story. You may return at any time to update your story.

NB: the font for this line of text looks really small. 

Name:
Old Copy: Your name as it should appear, if you share your story.
New Copy: Your name as it should appear, if you share your story. †

Word Verification:
Old Copy: This question is for testing whether you are a human visitor and to prevent automated spam submissions.
New Copy: This question is for testing whether you are a human being! 

Notes about ToS:
Old Copy: Please note: in regard to the videos and stories you submit – the Terms of Service do state that "When you contribute to a public area such as an open forum on the internet, the information that you submit will be made available to the general public. For this reason, we recommend that you do not submit any sensitive information including your full name, home address, telephone number, or other information that would enable other users or anyone reading this Website to locate you."

New Copy: † Please note: in regard to the videos and stories you submit – the Terms of Service do state that "When you contribute to a public area such as an open forum on the internet, the information that you submit will be made available to the general public. For this reason, we recommend that you do not submit any sensitive information including your full name, home address, telephone number, or other information that would enable other users or anyone reading this Website to locate you."

Comment 1

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Fixed copy.

Comment 2

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Verified FIXED on https://serviceweek.mozilla.org/auth/create/en_US.