496903 - Pledge Page - small copy addition

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Websites Graveyard :: mozillaservice.org, defect)

Description

[Jane Finette]

Austin - I just saw that the CTA to get to the Tell you Story page from the Pledge Page is not very strong (its almost buried in the text). 

Please can we add a link a url to send people to the Tell Your Story at the bottom of the page underneath the sumbit button in grey e.g. just like the option on the Thank you for pledging page:
http://mozillaservice.stage.mozilla.com/index.php/tell_us/thank_you

NEW Copy:
I Want To Add My Story  

(url off to - http://mozillaservice.stage.mozilla.com/tell_us/your_stories/en_US)

Comment 1

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Okay, made this change.

Feedback:
Is there a better way to communicate this?
1) We have this link twice, before and after the form
2) The link floating down there seems like it might be a usability issue with people filling out the pledge form, but skipping the Submit button

Suggestion - Why don't we reuse a prime box (Already have a project), or create a new Prime box? We should remove the last sentence, so there aren't two CTA for the same link.

Comment 2

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Attachment: dropped sentance added prime box

Screenshot showing proposed feedback

Comment 3

[Jane Finette]

Thanks Austin - I think this is a good idea.

Comment 4

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Updates completed.

Comment 5

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Verified FIXED.