Closed Bug 499873 Opened 15 years ago Closed 15 years ago

Mobile: Typos/nits on Fennec Features page

Categories

(www.mozilla.org :: General, defect)

Product:
www.mozilla.org
Component:
General
Platform:
x86
All
Type:
defect
Priority:
Not set
Severity:
normal

Tracking

(Not tracked)

Status:
VERIFIED FIXED

People

(Reporter: stephend, Assigned: rdoherty)

References

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URL
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Details

1. Typo: "Because leaving your PC shouldn’t mean leaving part of Web behind."; should be "part of the..."
2. Mock has "Fennec (beta) Features"; impl. has "Fennec Features"
3. Missing the right-nav menu that the mock has
4. "Installation details and system requirements" should use InitialCaps, per mock and prevailing Mozilla.com style
5. Please add the serial/Oxford/Harvard comma after "a password manager," in the "Just Like Firefox" section
6. On "We've Got Your Back", the "Learn more" link is unlinked
7. Missing "Privacy Policy | Terms of Conditions" links

Might be more later!
Summary: Typos/nits on Fennec Features page → Mobile: Typos/nits on Fennec Features page
r28562

Fixes 1,2,4,5,6 & 7 (except 7 doesn't have any pages to link to yet).
r28598

fixes issue #3
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 15 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Not sure why #4 isn't showing up (since I see it included in r28562), but it's not; reopening.
Status: RESOLVED → REOPENED
Resolution: FIXED → ---
r28651 should fix #4
Status: REOPENED → RESOLVED
Closed: 15 years ago → 15 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Verified FIXED -- we'll have to file a separate bug to get the Privacy Policy and Terms & Conditions links pointing to where they should.
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
Component: www.mozilla.org/firefox → www.mozilla.org
Component: www.mozilla.org → General
Product: Websites → www.mozilla.org
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