Copy changes to include Mission - FAQ Page on Causes

VERIFIED FIXED in 1.1

Status

Websites Graveyard
mozillaservice.org
P2
normal
VERIFIED FIXED
8 years ago
7 years ago

People

(Reporter: Jane Finette, Assigned: ozten)

Tracking

unspecified
x86
All

Details

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Description

8 years ago
NB: We want to delete the current Causes FAQ at: http://serviceweek.mozilla.org/learn_more/faq/en_US#causes


and add a *new* FAQ question and answer:

NEW Question: 

How can I get involved with Mozilla and make the Internet even better?

NEW Answer:

Mozilla is a global community dedicated to building a better Internet. Thousands of people have already gotten involved with upgrading the web by building great software and spreading the ideas of transparency, participation, creativity and shared control. You do not have to be a developer to make a difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved. Visit http://www.mozilla.org/contribute/ Join us and help make the Internet even better!
(Assignee)

Comment 1

8 years ago
Changes in r28677.
(Assignee)

Updated

8 years ago
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 8 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Two things:

1) "You do not have to be a developer to make a
difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved." should have a ";" conjoining those two clauses.
2) Right now we link "Join Us" to http://www.mozilla.org/contribute, but that's not the name of the page; Jane, was it intended to link to "Join us"?  The way I read it, "Join us" is the start of the next sentence.
Status: RESOLVED → REOPENED
Resolution: FIXED → ---

Comment 3

8 years ago
assigning priority,severity and milestone...
Assignee: nobody → jfinette
Priority: -- → P2
Target Milestone: --- → 1.1
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Comment 4

8 years ago
 Your comment was:

    (In reply to comment #2)
    > Two things:
    > 
    > 1) "You do not have to be a developer to make a
    > difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get
    > involved." should have a ";" conjoining those two clauses.

    You are right Stephen. 

    > 2) Right now we link "Join Us" to http://www.mozilla.org/contribute, but that's
    > not the name of the page; Jane, was it intended to link to "Join us"?  The way
    > I read it, "Join us" is the start of the next sentence.

    Also correct Stephen - I had envisaged we would actually display the url -- to
    encourage people to understand more about where they were clicking off to.
    "Join us... " is the start of the next sentence.
OS: Mac OS X → All
-> Austin to implement those string changes, then, thanks, Jane!
Assignee: jfinette → ozten.bugs
(Assignee)

Comment 6

8 years ago
I'm barely literate...

I've changed
You do not have to be a developer to make a difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved. Visit [Join us] and help ...

into

You do not have to be a developer to make a difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved; Visit [http://www.mozilla.org]. Join us and help ...

Was that the expected copy change?
Status: REOPENED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 8 years ago8 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED

Comment 7

8 years ago
verified.
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED

Updated

7 years ago
Component: mozillaservice.org → mozillaservice.org
Product: Websites → Websites Graveyard
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