500733 - Copy changes to include Mission - FAQ Page on Causes

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Websites Graveyard :: mozillaservice.org, defect, P2)

Description

[Jane Finette]

NB: We want to delete the current Causes FAQ at: http://serviceweek.mozilla.org/learn_more/faq/en_US#causes


and add a *new* FAQ question and answer:

NEW Question: 

How can I get involved with Mozilla and make the Internet even better?

NEW Answer:

Mozilla is a global community dedicated to building a better Internet. Thousands of people have already gotten involved with upgrading the web by building great software and spreading the ideas of transparency, participation, creativity and shared control. You do not have to be a developer to make a difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved. Visit http://www.mozilla.org/contribute/ Join us and help make the Internet even better!

Comment 1

[Austin King [:ozten]]

Changes in r28677.

Comment 2

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

Two things:

1) "You do not have to be a developer to make a
difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved." should have a ";" conjoining those two clauses.
2) Right now we link "Join Us" to http://www.mozilla.org/contribute, but that's not the name of the page; Jane, was it intended to link to "Join us"?  The way I read it, "Join us" is the start of the next sentence.

Comment 3

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

assigning priority,severity and milestone...

Comment 4

[Jane Finette]

 Your comment was:

    (In reply to comment #2)
    > Two things:
    > 
    > 1) "You do not have to be a developer to make a
    > difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get
    > involved." should have a ";" conjoining those two clauses.

    You are right Stephen. 

    > 2) Right now we link "Join Us" to http://www.mozilla.org/contribute, but that's
    > not the name of the page; Jane, was it intended to link to "Join us"?  The way
    > I read it, "Join us" is the start of the next sentence.

    Also correct Stephen - I had envisaged we would actually display the url -- to
    encourage people to understand more about where they were clicking off to.
    "Join us... " is the start of the next sentence.

Comment 5

[Stephen Donner [:stephend] Not actively reading bugmail]

-> Austin to implement those string changes, then, thanks, Jane!

Comment 6

[Austin King [:ozten]]

I'm barely literate...

I've changed
You do not have to be a developer to make a difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved. Visit [Join us] and help ...

into

You do not have to be a developer to make a difference in the Mozilla Project, there are many ways anyone can get involved; Visit [http://www.mozilla.org]. Join us and help ...

Was that the expected copy change?

Comment 7

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

verified.