515581 - Moz Service Week ACTUAL Week: Copy changes to Learn More - I Need Help

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Websites Graveyard :: mozillaservice.org, defect)

Description

[Jane Finette]

Copy changes Part I:

OLD COPY:

I Need Help

For years now, the Mozilla community has been making a browser that makes the Web better. Now we're reaching out, reaching further – we want to make things better in your local community, and for other public benefit organizations. We believe the Internet can be used to enrich people's lives, and to make a difference to you and your organization.

We are ready to take action. Tell us how we can help…
Find out more about Mozilla Service Week
How Can You Benefit?

During the week of September 14-21, 2009, we hope to make a serious difference in your local community. If you are part of an organization, library, school, community center, church, or sports group or even just an individual in need of some technical help, the talented and tech-savvy community of Mozilla is here for you.

Here are just a few ideas of how we can help you or your organization:

    * Teach senior citizens how to use the Web.
    * Show a non-profit how to use social networking to grow its base of supporters.
    * Help install a wireless network at a school.
    * Create Web how-to materials for a library's computer cluster.
    * Refurbish hardware for a local computer center.
    * Update a non-profit organization's website.
    * Teach the values of the open Web to other public benefit organizations.

The Mozilla community has a history of changing the world – and the Web – in all kinds of amazing ways. Now we want to make a personal difference in your world, and help fellow public benefit organizations gain from the open web. See how our community has already pledged to help groups like yours: Read Pledge Stories.

NEW COPY:

I Need Help

For years now, the Mozilla community has been making a browser that makes the Web better. Now we're reaching out, reaching further – we want to make things better in your local community, and for other public benefit organizations. We believe the Internet can be used to enrich people's lives, and to make a difference to you and your organization.

We are taking action this week. Tell us how we can help…
Find out more about Mozilla Service Week

How Can You Benefit?

During this week - September 14-21, 2009, together with hundreds of volunteers, we are making serious differences to local communities around the world. And its not too late to also ask for help. If you are part of an organization, library, school, community center, church, or sports group or even just an individual in need of some technical help, the talented and tech-savvy community of Mozilla is here for you.

Here are just a few ideas of how we can help you or your organization:

    * Teach senior citizens how to use the Web.
    * Show a non-profit how to use social networking to grow its base of supporters.
    * Help install a wireless network at a school.
    * Create Web how-to materials for a library's computer cluster.
    * Refurbish hardware for a local computer center.
    * Update a non-profit organization's website.
    * Teach the values of the open Web to other public benefit organizations.

The Mozilla community has a history of changing the world – and the Web – in all kinds of amazing ways. Now we want to make a personal difference in your world, and help fellow public benefit organizations gain from the open web. See how our community is already volunteering to help groups like yours: Read Stories.

****Links: 

i) Find out more about Mozilla Service Week - should go to: http://mozillaservice.org/learn_more/faq/en_US

ii) Read Stories - should go to: http://mozillaservice.stage.mozilla.com/activity/stories/en_US


Copy Changes Part II:

OLD COPY:

Share Your Project with Us

Once you have a project in mind, please come back and tell us what you need. Be sure to register your project so your volunteer's donated hours count towards the Mozilla Service Week grand total! Register your project.


NEW COPY:
Share Your Project with Us

Once you have a project in mind and in process, please come back and tell us what all about it. Be sure to register your project so your volunteer's donated hours count towards the Mozilla Service Week grand total! Register your project.

** Links - Register your project -- http://mozillaservice.org/tell_us/your_stories/en_US



Badges


OLD COPY:

Support OneWebDay

Learn how you can take part in OneWebDay, and make the Web better!

Find out how 

NEW COPY:

Support OneWebDay

Learn how you can take part in OneWebDay on Sept 22nd, and make the Web better!

Find out how

(Link to: hhttp://www.mozilla.org/causes/onewebday/)

Comment 1

[Austin King [:ozten]]

These changes are minor and subtle, so I"m making them in the en po file only. These changes won't be pushed out to other L10n, nor phase 2 conditional.

Done r51319.

Comment 2

[Mary]

NP - I am not sure what phase 2 conditional is though!

Comment 3

[krupa raj[:krupa]]

verified