Closed
Bug 521884
Opened 15 years ago
Closed 14 years ago
Nit: "What is a Jetpack?" answer isn't very clear
Categories
(Websites Graveyard :: jetpackgallery.mozillalabs.com, defect, P3)
Websites Graveyard
jetpackgallery.mozillalabs.com
Tracking
(Not tracked)
RESOLVED
FIXED
People
(Reporter: abuchanan, Assigned: kurt.cagle)
References
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Details
On the home page of the new Jetpack gallery... """ What is a Jetpack? Jetpack is a newly formed experiment in using open Web technologies to enhance the browser, with the goal of allowing anyone who can build a Web site to participate in making the Web a better place to work, communicate and play. """ It seems convoluted and marketese-y to me. I look at that block of text and my eyes go numb. Since it's the main (actually, the only) copy above the fold on the home page, I suggest something more comprehensible and useful, like a bulleted list of the main points you want to get across. I'm no wordsmith, * New experiment in the open Web * Simple tools for enhancing the browser * Easy-to-use for anyone At the very least, we should link to a page with more detailed information. BUT, really this is a one-time question/answer, targeted at new users only. Instead, you could answer the question "What can I do on this website?" (again, not a wordsmith) * Find out what a Jetpack is * Search/browse for Jetpacks * Check out the most popular Jetpacks * Find out how to make your own. It's easy! * yada yada I really hope this is helpful and not overly picky. If not, sorry.
Comment 1•15 years ago
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The production version of the Jetpack introduction text is very different from the text in this bug, I believe it is much easier to understand now. As for the latter bullet list of concerns, we will be addressing the load and share of them here: https://developer.mozilla.org/en/Jetpack
Severity: normal → minor
Priority: -- → P3
Updated•15 years ago
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Assignee: nobody → kurt.cagle
Comment 2•14 years ago
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Committed the first paragraph. Adding the entire text did not fit within the text block. == Sending application/views/home/home_index_featured.php Transmitting file data . Committed revision r63517.
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 14 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
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