On the home page of the new Jetpack gallery... """ What is a Jetpack? Jetpack is a newly formed experiment in using open Web technologies to enhance the browser, with the goal of allowing anyone who can build a Web site to participate in making the Web a better place to work, communicate and play. """ It seems convoluted and marketese-y to me. I look at that block of text and my eyes go numb. Since it's the main (actually, the only) copy above the fold on the home page, I suggest something more comprehensible and useful, like a bulleted list of the main points you want to get across. I'm no wordsmith, * New experiment in the open Web * Simple tools for enhancing the browser * Easy-to-use for anyone At the very least, we should link to a page with more detailed information. BUT, really this is a one-time question/answer, targeted at new users only. Instead, you could answer the question "What can I do on this website?" (again, not a wordsmith) * Find out what a Jetpack is * Search/browse for Jetpacks * Check out the most popular Jetpacks * Find out how to make your own. It's easy! * yada yada I really hope this is helpful and not overly picky. If not, sorry.
The production version of the Jetpack introduction text is very different from the text in this bug, I believe it is much easier to understand now. As for the latter bullet list of concerns, we will be addressing the load and share of them here: https://developer.mozilla.org/en/Jetpack
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