Closed Bug 528586 Opened 10 years ago Closed 10 years ago

Copy changes to First Run for Tuesday String Freeze

Categories

(Firefox for Android Graveyard :: General, defect)

defect
Not set

Tracking

(Not tracked)

VERIFIED FIXED
fennec1.0

People

(Reporter: clooney, Assigned: Gavin)

Details

(Whiteboard: [fennec l10n][l10n])

Attachments

(1 file)

Please change "Sync your PC and mobile with Weave. Customize with add-ons. Surf with the Awesome Bar and much, much, much more." TO 

"Synchronize your PC and with Weave Sync. Customize the add-ons. Surf with the Awesome Bar and much, much, much more."

Under Get Up and Go: 
Place change "Get Weave to help break in your Firefox. Share your preferences, bookmarks, browsing history and more between your PC and mobile." TO

"Get Weave Sync to help break in your Firefox. Share your browsing history, bookmarks, saved passwords and tabs between your PC and mobile."

Change button to read "Get the Weave Sync add-on"
(In reply to comment #0)
> "Synchronize your PC and with Weave Sync. Customize the add-ons. Surf with the Awesome Bar and much, much, much more."

This looks like it's missing a "mobile" after "your PC and", and "customize the add-ons" on its own doesn't seem right - seems like "the" should be "with", or something?
Drrr. "Synchronize your PC and mobile with Weave Sync. Customize with add-ons. Surf with the Awesome Bar and much, much, much more."
Attached patch patchSplinter Review
Attachment #412420 - Flags: review?(mark.finkle)
Attachment #412420 - Flags: review?(mark.finkle) → review+
fixed: https://hg.mozilla.org/mobile-browser/rev/6d217997c561
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 10 years ago
OS: Mac OS X → All
Hardware: x86 → All
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Target Milestone: --- → Post-B5
verified FIXED on builds:

Mozilla/5.0 (Windows; U; Window3sCE 5.2; en-US; rv:1.9.2b4pre) Gecko/20091116 Namoroka/3.6b4pre Fennec/1.0a4pre

and

Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux armv7l; Nokia N900; en-US; rv:1.9.2b3pre) Gecko/20091116 Firefox/3.6b4pre Fennec/1.0b6pre

and

Mozilla/5.0 (X11; U; Linux armv6l; Nokia N8xx; en-US; rv:1.9.3a1pre) Gecko/20091116 Firefox/3.7a1pre Fennec/1.0b5
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED
Whiteboard: [fennec l10n][l10n]
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